FIC: Leaving Marks :: Chapter Two :: A Study into Psychological Bias

[stormsandsins]

Author's note: You'll find I took the liberty of exploring and developing the academic side of Sky High a little bit more here. Enjoy :)

Touch of fire, touch of ice. A wary convergence to a steadier rapprochement through the years.

Comments

[stormsandsins]

He's a lovely potrayl of a cheeky boy.

I used to banter back and forth all the time with one of my guy friends in high school. This was strangely reminiscent of our conversations where we'd invariably talk about sex at one point or another and he'd flat-out deny it. Silly boys.

And then Paul being dead on his feet from just studying and babysitting and life in general is such an echo of a highschooler who just pulled an all-nighter.

I don't think I ever pulled all-nighters before my second year of college, and especially now in university. But I did last night while writing that bit, so yeah, experience renders realism.

The powers you gave people are great because they're so diverse and different, from snakes to glue to invisibility. I liked the glue best though.

*snort* I have a whole table of possible powers I can give characters, all sorted according to their Focus groups *facepalm* I'm insane. There, I said it. I don't think I have a favourite power, though. I guess the glue's pretty cool, but the chameleon dude (Sam, Warren's lab partner) seems even cooler imo. Pity I wasn't able to develop his character here. He's not at all like the guy who can shapeshift into other people in the movie.

I like the transition Claire and Warren are making, it's back and forth between tolerance and aggravation.

Hey, can't make him like her too fast! ;) Or vice-versa. Right now it's just wariness all around.

[grayglube]

Oh yes the animosity must have time to flourish into something akin to a robust feast of sexual tension, yadda yadda yadda.

Wouldn't make much sense if they humped like bunnies the first time they enter the caf and saw each other or jumped on each other during save the citizen and became a tangled mush of sweaty limbs and so forth.

Gotta have an abundance of plot. Which you do.

[stormsandsins]

Now that'd be a great idea if I ever wanted to write a snarky Warren/Mary Sue parody. Eyes lock while playing Save the Citizen. Opposing team member pushes him to her, they start humping like wild beasts.

Icy cum falls out of her. Now that's just deranged. haha :D

Woot, I have plot!

[grayglube]

You just made me choke on my cigarette with the icy cum line...

and then Warren melts the icy cum and it become molten cum which burns through Mary Sue's leg and the floor and his lady love is crippled for life thereby leading Warren to come up with creative positions for wheelchair sex.

Plot is tasty.

[grayglube]

"plot is tasty" was not supposed to be struck through, because it is tasty and delicious.

[stormsandsins]

Thought so. Just when you said plot was good. And then you backstab me and say plot isn't tasty? Pfft. ;)

[grayglube]

I gotta keep you on your toes hun ;P

[stormsandsins]

*kilt ded*

I - I mean... molten cum... lady love... wheelchair sex...

BWAHAHA.