Fic: Fate 3/3 (Cara/Kahlan, NC-17)

[stopstartstall]

Title: Fate (3/3)
Author: stopstartstall
Pairing: Cara/Kahlan.
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: ~6100
Summary: When Zedd casts the Spell of Undoing it throws them back to the day Cara should have been taken by the Mord’Sith. AU from that point on.
Previous: Part One, Part Two.
Author's Note: Sorry it took so long to get this up, I was having major

Comments

[mayireadtoday]

Zedd is still trying to match up Richard and Kahlan -- loser. And then he redeems himself.

Perfect description of Cara: “She doesn’t talk all that much if she can help it but her eyes say everything she can’t."

The sex scene was very hot.

I love the happily-ever-after.

[stopstartstall]

Thank you very much!

[andrea_reisende]

Such a great story. Thanks.

[stopstartstall]

Thanks for the comment :)

[green78]

AWWWW!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY SFM!!!!!!! *SQUISHHUGGLES YOU AND STORY*

And when Cara leaned in to kiss her, her mouth was warm and sweet with promises, and Kahlan felt like she was already there.

GORGEOUS. Reminds me of a book... Did you happen to read Ash, by Melinda Lo?

[stopstartstall]

OMG I TOTALLY RIPPED OFF ASH AND DIDN'T EVEN REALISE :/ Bad, brain, bad! It's funny I wrote that and I was like HUH THATS KIND OF FAMILAR and then I was like ...NM I'M TOTES A BETTER WRITER THAN I THOUGHT :D! *headdesks*

Glad you enjoyed it though, despite the last line rip-off lolz <3

[green78]

LOL!!! Well at least you read the book too!!! Isn't it AWESOME??? As is this story OMFG YAAAYYY!!! There needs to be more of Kahlan pleasuring Cara. *nudge nudge wink wink* xD

[stopstartstall]

Ash is hands down AMAZING. ngl I love it to death. I realised the sex was a bit one sided but hey, you know they spent the rest of night doing lots of unspeakable things to each other... I just didn't write about it :P

[simplesetgo]

Oh, this fic... I love it to pieces. I actually - no lie - I got up and went outside (full moon is pretty) twice during this part because I didn't want it to end!

“Can we... Can we just go home?”
I may have teared up a little. I <3 happy endings.

[stopstartstall]

Oh wow that's so flattering <3 I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[lucidlucifer13]

I absolutely adored this XD Fantastic end!!

[stopstartstall]

Thank you very much!