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Title: "Inheritance: Chapter Three"
Author: abe16kidbosco
Word Count: 1,353
Summary: A family member spontaneously shows up at NCIS Headquarters to make an unexpected delivery.
Author's Notes: I am Tony DiNozzo's keeper. *Gets headslapped* Huh? Was I dreaming again? ...Okay, fine- NCIS and Tony DiNozzo don't belong to me, and I do not own the rights to them ( Read more... )
Author: abe16kidbosco
Word Count: 1,353
Summary: A family member spontaneously shows up at NCIS Headquarters to make an unexpected delivery.
Author's Notes: I am Tony DiNozzo's keeper. *Gets headslapped* Huh? Was I dreaming again? ...Okay, fine- NCIS and Tony DiNozzo don't belong to me, and I do not own the rights to them ( Read more... )
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Otherwise, well written the part you asked me about looks fine to me. I like the banter between the team in this chapter.
Now please send Gibbs to kiss Tony's injuries better and tell Gibbs to kick Senor's ass for me!
Later hun. I chat with ya when you have some time. Also I'm sorry the texts weren't coming through earlier.
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...Thanks bunches!!! Glad you liked!
...You'll just have to keep reading and see what happens. ;)
...Yeah, I don't know what was up with the texts. I was out to dinner with my parents and aunt and uncle, which is what I texted, and then I got your voicemail... Then, when I was going through my text messages, there were all these blank texts that I sent to you. No idea HOW that happened, but I'm SO sorry. If I have to text, I make it short because I know you get charged, so my apologies for tonight. *HUGS* Crazy busy this week, but I'll try to call you mid-week.
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Couldn't stop reading 'til the last words but I can't believe what you put Tony through **goes ProtectiveKate & carefully wraps arms around Dinozzo Jr**
Now I want to read more... love how "the gut" never fail Gibbs. FGunny, I had a feeling your Gibbs would do just that: hang up and trace Tony's cell. Had to LOL @ Tony's food poisening excuse: reminded me of the one Ari forced Kate to give Gibbs in "Réveille". Only she managed to sneak in a coded hint.
Can't wait for chap 4.
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...Really?! That's a good thing! :D LOL As stated in reply above, I'm a sucker for H/C Tony. Can't help it. ;) Awwwe Kate and Jr. *Squee*
...Haven't posted here yet, but I do have Chapter 4 up HERE if you wish to read. :) ...You know my Gibbs well. ;) ...lol Yeah, Tony had to lie, but I couldn't think of a better excuse, and considering he just ate, it worked. lol.
...Thanks bunches!!!
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yup, really. Oooh, kinda picked that up but I hadn't realised you could make him suffer so much but, then again, what would be a good story without a little angst?
*Squees with you. Oh, AngelKate's just wacked Paula's head for implying she should've shot Tony when she had the chance. OTOH, AngelKate hates to admit but even her can't do miracles on the healing of purposedly inflicted wounds and so... that's why she'll just grab & shoot the glass of bourbon Jenny's handing her, just to be ready in case of further injuries you might want to inflict on Tony*
Aww, read chap 4 and, let me tell you that it gets better with each chapter. And you don't even need beta. Loved the "who did this to you, Dinozzo?" and Tony being stubborn. Also loved the final "I asked the same question and that's the answer I got". ;p
Can't wait to see how Gibbs vs Di Sr's gonna end. *eg*
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...I didn't know I could either! Atleast I didn't have him get shot (I think I wore that one out with Nick Stokes in my CSI fics. *G*). ;)
LOL YAY for Angel!Kate. Love it! Awwwe Jenny. *Tear* I miss Jen, but atleast we know that her and Kate are up there, having fun. ;)
...Wow. I'm speechless. Thanks for such wonderful compliments. ...Glad you liked that dialogue! I'm trying my best to stay in character as close as possible even though I totally want Gibbs to pull him into a huge hug and comfort him. ;)
I can't wait to get it written! ;)
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Thanks for reading! :)
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which were really, really good, but still: "MORE PLEASE?!"
::snicker:: Have a good WE!
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Thanks! You, too!
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