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Title: "Inheritance: Chapter Three"
Author: abe16kidbosco
Word Count: 1,353
Summary: A family member spontaneously shows up at NCIS Headquarters to make an unexpected delivery.
Author's Notes: I am Tony DiNozzo's keeper. *Gets headslapped* Huh? Was I dreaming again? ...Okay, fine- NCIS and Tony DiNozzo don't belong to me, and I do not own the rights to them ( Read more... )
Author: abe16kidbosco
Word Count: 1,353
Summary: A family member spontaneously shows up at NCIS Headquarters to make an unexpected delivery.
Author's Notes: I am Tony DiNozzo's keeper. *Gets headslapped* Huh? Was I dreaming again? ...Okay, fine- NCIS and Tony DiNozzo don't belong to me, and I do not own the rights to them ( Read more... )
Couldn't stop reading 'til the last words but I can't believe what you put Tony through **goes ProtectiveKate & carefully wraps arms around Dinozzo Jr**
Now I want to read more... love how "the gut" never fail Gibbs. FGunny, I had a feeling your Gibbs would do just that: hang up and trace Tony's cell. Had to LOL @ Tony's food poisening excuse: reminded me of the one Ari forced Kate to give Gibbs in "Réveille". Only she managed to sneak in a coded hint.
Can't wait for chap 4.
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...Really?! That's a good thing! :D LOL As stated in reply above, I'm a sucker for H/C Tony. Can't help it. ;) Awwwe Kate and Jr. *Squee*
...Haven't posted here yet, but I do have Chapter 4 up HERE if you wish to read. :) ...You know my Gibbs well. ;) ...lol Yeah, Tony had to lie, but I couldn't think of a better excuse, and considering he just ate, it worked. lol.
...Thanks bunches!!!
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yup, really. Oooh, kinda picked that up but I hadn't realised you could make him suffer so much but, then again, what would be a good story without a little angst?
*Squees with you. Oh, AngelKate's just wacked Paula's head for implying she should've shot Tony when she had the chance. OTOH, AngelKate hates to admit but even her can't do miracles on the healing of purposedly inflicted wounds and so... that's why she'll just grab & shoot the glass of bourbon Jenny's handing her, just to be ready in case of further injuries you might want to inflict on Tony*
Aww, read chap 4 and, let me tell you that it gets better with each chapter. And you don't even need beta. Loved the "who did this to you, Dinozzo?" and Tony being stubborn. Also loved the final "I asked the same question and that's the answer I got". ;p
Can't wait to see how Gibbs vs Di Sr's gonna end. *eg*
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...I didn't know I could either! Atleast I didn't have him get shot (I think I wore that one out with Nick Stokes in my CSI fics. *G*). ;)
LOL YAY for Angel!Kate. Love it! Awwwe Jenny. *Tear* I miss Jen, but atleast we know that her and Kate are up there, having fun. ;)
...Wow. I'm speechless. Thanks for such wonderful compliments. ...Glad you liked that dialogue! I'm trying my best to stay in character as close as possible even though I totally want Gibbs to pull him into a huge hug and comfort him. ;)
I can't wait to get it written! ;)
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G>ood thing you could do it after all. It's testing the limits of your writing aka very good! :)
hehe, thanks & glad you like it. This image just popped to mind and I had to write it. Oh, they're so having fun. Did I ever fwd you the link of the semi AU start of a fic (aka NCIS team meet me in my town) nicis-anatomy made me write right after my car accident? It all started as replies to comments and then, my replies turned out into mini fics... PMed, if you want to have a laugh and wee that you really don't need to beta.
YMTW for the fdk but again, just putting down what pops to mind when reading your fic. And, don't worry abnout characterization, you've got them all perfectly. IMO. But then again, am no expert on those ones. ;)
even though I totally want Gibbs to pull him into a huge hug and comfort him. ;)
Then what are you waiting for? Write it the way you want it! <-- well, just my 2 cts.
Can I go "me neither" without sounding naggy? :D
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...Again, many many manyyyyyyy thanks! :D
...No, you never forwarded the link, but I got your PM. :) Haven't had the chance to sit down and read (I want to read when I can focus on it and not be distracted), but I promise I will soon and I'll reply when I do! :D I'm sure it's amazing. :D
...Awwwe. *Blushes* Did I say thank you yet? *G*
...LOL. I'm trying to stay in character, and that as awesome as that would be, it would ruin the whole story. ;)
...LOL Of course! You never sound naggy. :) Oh, and P.S. Chapter 5 is *finally* up HERE. ;)
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Hey, no rush! B'sides, it was really for the fun. But I'm interested to know if it's at least understandable. And in characters.
Read chap 5 and it made me sad. Superbly written as always but Tony's father shooting a 7 year old, my. That brought tears to my eyes. Then I thought that was an experience Tony could share with Gibbs since Shannon but mostly Kelly was the same age when killed. I hope Gibbs won't let Sr get away with it.
In other words, chap 6's on already *g*
Still didn't have time to reply to your FB PM but, I'm crushing fingers for that police job you talked about. Hope you'll land it. As for the translation... will have to find time to PM back but that won't be before friday.
TC!
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Keep nagging me on that fic because I keep forgetting to check my LJ messages. LOL. Or FB it to me? From what I read so far, it was understandable and in character. :D
Awwwe. Well... Read Chapter 6. It's been up for a while now. (I really need to kick my butt and get writing!). *Whistles* ;)
Well, I think I posted, but that didn't happen. Thanks though. :) (It's okay, because I'm in a band now, so that trumps all, right? lol).
Oooh thanks again for the translation! Speaking of... I was watching the closing ceremony of the Olympics... Someone said, "Merci beaucoup" and I said to my Mom, "OMG I KNOW WHAT THAT MEANS, and I'll NEVER forget the 'U'!" Haha She just looked at me funny, and then I had to explain it to her. It was amusing, but YAY for me finally learning. :D (Thought you'd enjoy that one. lol) *G*
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YAY, permission to nag! Nagguity-nag in naggingingy nag nag land. And did I say "nagging"? Didn't? In that case: ***massive nagging attack here*** Oh, glad to know it was understandable and canon, chratcters wise. :)
drats, I missed it? **writer reminding headslap coming in 3... 2... 1... 0,5 ...0 .... **headslap delayed** Ha! Gotcha! What? Gotta admit Gibbs's right: it's not fun if you know it's coming. Plus Kate could never do such a thing to To.. *headslaps & tights your muse on the compy chair* Oops! Too late. :D
WHAT?! You're in a band and you didn't tell me?!! SQUEE!!!! That so rocks!!!!! What kind of music? Tell me, tell me! Me wants to know everything about it!! *smoothes hand on former headslap spot*
You're more than welcome! And ROTFL at your french moment. YAY for recognizing it! I'd have loved to see your motehr's face but, it must've been so LOL! YAY on learning! **and you're right, I really did enjoy that one* :D
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