Fic: Just Tonks, Year one

[stoicstella]

Title: Just Tonks
Rating: PG13 [overall]
Characters Tonks, various Weasleys
Notes: This is my first time really writing these characters, and feedback would be lovely. Feel free to point out any glaring errors, in spelling, grammar, character design...etc.
Summary: One year of Tonks time at Hogwarts for each chapter...

Comments

[stoicstella]

:) thanks. I really think it would be something that she would have a hard time learning how to control... and yes talk about a bad hair day, indeed. Thank-you so much for commenting... I really had my doubts that anyone would. :)

[etrangere]

yay, CharliexTonks ! You really got me addicted to that pairing, you know ? ^^ I love the description of Tonks needing to concentrate not to change shapes. I love how she beat up Charlie XDDD The offhanded mention of Sirius was great, as one of the one of Bella ^^

Now I'll just go away for a minute and rant against Bill. I don't know why I dislike that kid so much, I just do >_>;

[stoicstella]

Thank-you, I really am glad that I hooked you on the Charlie/Tonks pairing, as I sort of got into my own head and it's good to have someone to bring along for the ride ^_^

You don't like Bill? My Bill, or Bill in general? lol Was it something he said?

Thanks so much for your comments. I wasn't sure if I would get much of anything on this story.

[etrangere]

We need a community for them. I know at least eudaimon ship them ^^

No, Bill in general. It's Harry's fault, how he described him as cool. I took an instant dislike of him. Besides he gives off massive Gary Stu vibe. He's the very smart boy who got all those NEWTS, he does the amazingly cool Indiana Johnes like job, has those long hair and earrings thing to show off how cool he is. And everybody likes him, really, does he have any flaw ? *sporks* Wannabe.

I love your writing ! I'm always willing to read it ^^

[stoicstella]

lol, I see your point. I guess I should write Bill next, and give him depth and flaws? He has such a marginal role in this story, you'll be happy to know, only mentioned in passing ^_^

and, you make me blush, I'm so glad you like to read my writing!

[xterm]

hehee. I like it. At least she has spunk here, unlike what JKR did to her in the last book....

[stoicstella]

That she does! It is my contention that her behaviour in the HBP can be explained and is not a reflection of her as a character, at least that is my hope. ^_^

Thanks so much for your comments, I really wasn't expecting to get much of any on this.

[pixychelle]

I love your kicking-ass-and-taking-names Tonks! (Though she's a little young for the "say my name" bit to be taking my mind in the direction it wants to go with it....)

I like her little observation about not being singled out in a large family. The grass is always greener, eh? And the whole thing about learning how to control her morphing is definitely interesting to read about.

[stoicstella]

Though she's a little young for the "say my name" bit to be taking my mind in the direction it wants to go with it

Nnn, both my sisters on the prior to posting read, had a nice snicker at that as well. I'm glad you like tough-skinned adolescent Tonks. I enjoyed her character quite a bit, once I got the ball rolling.

Thanks so much for your comment... I was really surprised to get any at all, and they keep coming. It makes me very happy. ^_^

[i_llbedammned]

I like how you included not only Tonks, but some of the Weasleys too. it makes it feel like you are more immersed in the world when you have more than one familiar character to deal with. I can see CharliexTonks, as someone mentioned before.

[stoicstella]

hee, oh... keep reading it and you will see Charlie/Tonks. I will be posting a chapter a day for seven days. Thanks for your comments. ^_-