Fic: Just Tonks, Year one

May 16, 2006 08:37

Title: Just Tonks
Rating: PG13 [overall]
Characters Tonks, various Weasleys
Notes: This is my first time really writing these characters, and feedback would be lovely. Feel free to point out any glaring errors, in spelling, grammar, character design...etc.
Summary: One year of Tonks time at Hogwarts for each chapter...

Year One: Aboard the Hogwart's Express )

fic: just tonks, tonks, weasley

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etrangere May 16 2006, 21:37:46 UTC
yay, CharliexTonks ! You really got me addicted to that pairing, you know ? ^^ I love the description of Tonks needing to concentrate not to change shapes. I love how she beat up Charlie XDDD The offhanded mention of Sirius was great, as one of the one of Bella ^^

Now I'll just go away for a minute and rant against Bill. I don't know why I dislike that kid so much, I just do >_>;

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stoicstella May 17 2006, 01:00:59 UTC
Thank-you, I really am glad that I hooked you on the Charlie/Tonks pairing, as I sort of got into my own head and it's good to have someone to bring along for the ride ^_^

You don't like Bill? My Bill, or Bill in general? lol Was it something he said?

Thanks so much for your comments. I wasn't sure if I would get much of anything on this story.

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etrangere May 17 2006, 15:47:10 UTC
We need a community for them. I know at least eudaimon ship them ^^

No, Bill in general. It's Harry's fault, how he described him as cool. I took an instant dislike of him. Besides he gives off massive Gary Stu vibe. He's the very smart boy who got all those NEWTS, he does the amazingly cool Indiana Johnes like job, has those long hair and earrings thing to show off how cool he is. And everybody likes him, really, does he have any flaw ? *sporks* Wannabe.

I love your writing ! I'm always willing to read it ^^

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stoicstella May 18 2006, 03:45:25 UTC
lol, I see your point. I guess I should write Bill next, and give him depth and flaws? He has such a marginal role in this story, you'll be happy to know, only mentioned in passing ^_^

and, you make me blush, I'm so glad you like to read my writing!

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etrangere May 18 2006, 06:21:32 UTC
lol don't worry on my account :)

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