Commentary time, for the longer of my Yuletide fics.
( Second Wind, now with liner notes )

Quin requested commentary on some part of the squeefit AU, and so, here goes.
( Holy Wood Dreams, now with comments )

gehayi requested commentary on the Discworld/Doctor Who crossover, so here it goes.
( Jelly Baby?, now with commentses )

Ji asked for bits of the mad crossover. Since they're all relatively short, I picked two of them, so here's two sections of A Realist's Guide to Ankh-Morpork (which I'm considering renaming Scenes From a Klatchian Take-Away):
( Feeding the Press )

For an original fic of mine, this time. I felt it earned one.
( Harmonious Madness, with commentary )

As requested by Ji:
( Off-Color Christmas )

( in which the madness well and truly descends )

'Tis insanely fun reading everyone else's, so I'm joining in. If you'd like to request something, I've set that up here, if only because more people see that LJ.
This commentary is primarily for my amusement, and will be conducted in two parts.
( Slight Return commentary, part one )