Comments | still_need_name: Teh ambiguous style fic

rhin_ariel in still_need_name

Teh ambiguous style fic

May 14, 2006 15:39

Okay, it's not that ambiguous. You can probably tell which pairing it is, and you can definitely tell who the woman is. But, anyway, back to the fic ( Read more... )

sparky fic

Comments 18

ankareeda May 14 2006, 19:54:36 UTC

Melancholy wonderful!

rhin_ariel May 15 2006, 19:08:34 UTC

Thank you very much!

speckleberry May 14 2006, 22:36:07 UTC

*cries* that was heart-wrenching...had me close to tears

Who’s going to take the bullet if it happens again?

that line made me...gah! so so so sad! i'm gonna add it to my memories so i can read it again.

rhin_ariel May 15 2006, 19:09:07 UTC

Aww, thank you.

A tissue perhaps?

speckleberry February 15 2007, 00:05:14 UTC

I've been bored at work lately and went through my memories, and i read this through again. It still gives me the same feeling it did the first time. Just so well said the whole way through, John's thoughts were captured perfectly in the last line as i said before.

*sniffs*

Thanks for the tissue, probably dusty and old now after months of sitting here waiting for a reply.

sunny_serenity May 15 2006, 06:44:04 UTC

rhin_ariel May 15 2006, 19:10:34 UTC

Aww, thanks.

dancingxhamster May 15 2006, 08:13:05 UTC

Oh...this is beautiful, but so sad *sniffs*
I loved it.
XoX

rhin_ariel May 15 2006, 19:10:47 UTC

Thank you very much!!

barker9 May 17 2006, 23:13:38 UTC

Wonderful, and I mean that in the story sense and writing. lol!

I think it’s one of those things that a guy can’t do... or putting the seat back down

Yeah, why don't we? I don't get it. lol! I mean 'we' as in guys in general. I, in all honesty, do put it back down without thinking.