Prompt: 189 fic The Learning Curve

Sep 28, 2010 17:05

"Xander Harris?" He jumped guiltily as Mr Johnson called his name. He wasn’t supposed to be listening was he?

"Yes?" he answered weakly.

His teacher was already dismissing the hall monitor who’d brought the note, "You’re needed in the library Harris."

"Oh."

"Just Xander?" asked Willow, her disappointment pretty evident.

"That’s all ( Read more... )

giles, fanfic, 189, xander, joyce, btvs, pg13

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buffyangellvr23 September 28 2010, 20:14:38 UTC
ooooh love it :)

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il_mio_capitano September 29 2010, 07:19:35 UTC
thank you :)

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il_mio_capitano September 29 2010, 07:22:06 UTC
Thank you. I started writing it more from Joyce's POV but I couldn't make it work. But all her anger made it into the re-write so nothing was wasted.

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rebcake September 28 2010, 23:46:42 UTC
The little detail of Xander unfolding the note for Giles really brought home the dire situation and how necessary they all are to each other. This is a terrific, truthful look at a horrible time. Well done!

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il_mio_capitano September 29 2010, 07:25:37 UTC
I think Xander did these little things without realising how important he was. He deserved a little character growth. Thanks for commenting I'm pleased you liked it.

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undrheavenskies September 29 2010, 00:31:40 UTC
oooh xander!! he really is the heart of that group...

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il_mio_capitano September 29 2010, 07:27:06 UTC
Yup Xander rocks.

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il_mio_capitano September 29 2010, 17:50:51 UTC
Yeah, Joyce is far too polite about it in the show.

I'm really pleased you liked this.

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