144: Fic - The Emptiness of the Black

[dipenates]

“Who’s there?”

Simon stifled a sigh. “It’s me, Captain. Simon.”

“Glad you made that clear, Doc. Weren’t like I could tell you by your voice.” Mal sounded coolly amused, standing in the half-light. He leaned on the handrail of the walkway. “Everything ok?”

“Sure.” Simon looked up at him. ”Just clearing my head.” He gestured out of the porthole

Comments

[sentine]

A perfect moment in space and time. Your characterization of Mal and Simon is spot on!

[dipenates]

Thanks very much!

[tinpra]

That was well done. I agree with sentine that your Mal and Simon voices are great.

[dipenates]

Thanks so much. This is my first Firefly fic, so I'm glad it wasn't a total car crash.

[tinpra]

lol! Not at all!

[deird1]

I really enjoyed this!

[dipenates]

Thanks v. much.

[angelus2hot]

Excellent Mal and Simon voices!!

I loved reading this!

[dipenates]

Thank you. :)

[mierke]

I agree with the others: excellent Mal and Simon!

I especially loved this part:
“Who’s there?”

Simon stifled a sigh. “It’s me, Captain. Simon.”

“Glad you made that clear, Doc. Weren’t like I could tell you by your voice.” Mal sounded coolly amused, standing in the half-light.

[dipenates]

Thanks so much for the comment.