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016 Tara Drabble

Jun 07, 2007 11:37

kTitle: The Last Day
Author: sithvicious
Characters: Tara
Rating: G
Words: 100
Prompt: 16, Tara
A/N: This drabble grew out of my feeling today, on my last day of high school ever. It's sort of a metaphor for today. But not.

The last day feels like the first day.

In the confusion of her last moments, Tara felt something almost like anticipation as the ( Read more... )

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Comments 14

xlivvielockex June 7 2007, 20:19:33 UTC

First off, congrats on finishing high school. College plans? Then we will get to say congrats in 4 years. :)

This was a beautiful piece. I like the way you tied the theme before, especially with repeating the first and last lines. Beautiful job.

sithvicious June 7 2007, 23:01:08 UTC

Due to some financial problems, the plan for college is SUNY New Paltz for a year, then Columbia College in Chicago for my magazine journalism major. :)

boy_named_susie June 7 2007, 21:48:25 UTC

Great drabble. I really like how you got into and explored the emotions Tara felt as she slipped away.

scarlettlily June 8 2007, 02:25:34 UTC

Very interesting

lauratd June 8 2007, 02:45:14 UTC

Congrats on leaving the hellmouth, I mean high school!

I like the section
"She still remembered, still cared for those she left behind. But she was at peace, complete at long last. She watched them."

alwaysjbj June 9 2007, 03:42:20 UTC

I really love this. Very well done!