KinKi Kids fanfic. Yes, you read that right.

Apr 04, 2011 20:56

I was trying to re-write a present for Leader (alksdfja;lkomg I seriously wrote THAT what was I thinking, must make this readable!a;lsdkfj;lsdjf;lsjk) and after a while I quit and took an hour or so to write this.

For ill_ame, for everything. I can't promise it's any good but I love you for giving me all that you did. Because you're right and they ( Read more... )

kinki kids, je

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anoudegozaruna April 5 2011, 02:18:18 UTC
Because he and Koichi were fated to be parts of each other. It was the only explanation. They weren't close but they knew each other completely. Not in love, but loved no one else more. Too much of something, too much of something else contradictory as well.

I think this is one of the best descriptions of KinKi I've ever read.

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still_ciircee June 2 2011, 15:12:13 UTC
Super, super late but I wanted to say 'thank you' for this comment. I really don't know them as well as I'd like but I'm so glad to know that I got that part right. Thank you!

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ill_ame April 5 2011, 02:58:02 UTC
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH, are you kidding, this is AMAZING and I'm deliriously happy now alskdjalskjdlaksjdklas!!!!

I am so in love with this fic! ♥ ♥ ♥ I love the dreamy, thoughtful, Tsuyoshi-ish atmosphere, and the images running through it are wonderful, and you captured their relationship so so well.

Nobody ever understood them and they understood the least and the most of all.
Omg.

Sometimes things got so far away from each other that they were actually together again
OMGOMG.

It's somehow heartbreaking and heartwarming at the same time. This tends to be my favorite type of KinKi fic, JSYK. :D :D

Also:
"Yours smells too," Koichi told him. "Like fish and existentialism.
LMAO. And bratty naked Koichi, I am dying. I love you.

Seriously, I love you, I love you, I love you. I don't think I can say it enough. THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! ♥ ♥

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still_ciircee June 2 2011, 15:13:50 UTC
So, this is retardedly late. But I wanted to say that I am so happy you like this. I really wanted this to be for you. Because they honestly are great and even if I'm constantly short on time (and they get the short end of it) I'm so glad you gave them to me.

Thank you. ♥

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font April 5 2011, 05:18:23 UTC
...this really just happened! circe! :o <3! <3! <3!

"You're not busy now, so come over."

He looked up at the sky. "First, tell me why the sky is blue," he requested.

Koichi smiled and he knew because he was looking. "It's because of the way the sunlight shatters itself trying to get through."

"Okay."

you make me so very very happy. <3!

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still_ciircee June 2 2011, 01:05:26 UTC
Well, this is very, very late but thank you! It did really just happen! And I'm glad I could make you happy.

Is there anything you want me to write for you? It might take a long time because I'm slow and often ignore what I should be doing but I will write something for you if you'd like.

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jirrana April 5 2011, 05:44:32 UTC
Hi, I've been a long time reader/stalker thing, but I had to come out of the woodwork to thank you for this fic! Kinki Kids is what got me into jpop those all so many years ago, and will always have a special place in my heart.

You were able to put into words how I've always thought their relationship to be like in an absolutely amazing, thoughtful, beautiful way, and I will be honest in the fact that I have read this like 10 times in the last 15 minutes or so!

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still_ciircee June 2 2011, 15:15:42 UTC
Thank you for coming out of the woodwork! I appreciate that more than I can say!

And, more over, I'm really so happy that you think I caught their relationship in words. I am loving them but they are kind of like trying to catch smoke at times. I think because it's just the two of them--and without the pressure they used to have--they're just themselves so they change much more easily. Which is also awesome. But anyhow! Thank you!

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tangiblewhimsy April 5 2011, 06:30:15 UTC
I love Kinki, but I don't slash them. Only you just made me. I think the most poignant and true thing was "Because," he said quietly, "we always seem so far away from each other." because THAT RIGHT THERE! *points* That is why I never really looked at them as a ship. There was always this sort of weird dissonance, a connection without a link. And the fact that you acknowledged it here and made them... Well, THEM. They're not really a couple, they're not really in love. But they still love each other more than anyone else. It's kind of the essence of their friendship and while I never thought of it in romantic terms? I can see it now. So this was all sorts of beautiful, and thank you for sharing ( ... )

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