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stevwil41

The Ride of a Lifetime

Jul 22, 2012 17:01

Title: The Ride of a Lifetime

Author: stevwil

Disclaimer: They're not mine, I'm just playing with them.

Rating: NC-17 for explicit sex

Characters: Jack/Ianto, Tosh, Owen, Gwen

Summary: Basically, there's some adrenaline-fueled explicit sex and some more on the dark man.

“Where are we going?” Jack asked practically bouncing as he followed Ianto out the ( Read more... )

nc-17, darkman, torchwood

Comments 18

iantojjackh July 22 2012, 21:22:58 UTC

Holy crap that was hot. Love that side of Ianto. Goes in search of an ice pop from the freezer.

stevwil41 July 22 2012, 21:28:56 UTC

Okay, I am literally laughing out loud. It might be a few stories down the road before we see that side of Ianto again. Writing that just about wore me out. I almost feel sorry for Jack. Almost:)

bluelilacs July 22 2012, 22:02:26 UTC

Sorry for Jack is definitely NOT what I'm feeling. Jealous maybe, but not sorry. He got a fantastic, hot surprise from Ianto that I don't think he'll be forgetting anytime soon.

I loved the playful mood the boys were in when they came in to work. Leave it to Owen to know exactly what they'd been up to and Ianto playing along and sticking it to him was hilarious. I also loved the satisfaction you allowed Ianto from knowing Gwen was so obviously not happy with what she'd just heard. The joke between Ianto and Tosh was priceless, especially with Jack being privy to it and not saying anything to give them away.

So loving this series. Very interesting developments on the Darkman. Can't wait for the next installment.

stevwil41 July 22 2012, 22:58:53 UTC

I'm not particularly sorry for him either. As a matter of (and this is totally paraphrasing from one of my favorite stories) I wouldn't be too picky about which end of that deal I was on. Screwing with Owen is fun. There may be some more of that. Screwing with Gwen isn't so much fun as something that I can't seem to stop doing. Neither can Ianto or Tosh apparently.

I'm glad you're loving this series. I'm loving writing it. I'm sort of using to better myself at things I feel I need to practice writing. I find writing about explicit sex difficult so every couple of stories there's some explicit sex. I wasn't sure about the humor so I've thrown a little of that in the last couple. I'm going to have to do some angst evenutally and I'm not looking forward to that. I don't even read really angsty stories. I can't begin to fathom writing one:)

milady_dragon July 23 2012, 01:37:37 UTC

I'll be in my bunk... *fans self*

And I'm looking forward to more of the Dark Man mystery. :)

stevwil41 July 23 2012, 01:43:25 UTC

I'm not going to lie, I took a nap after I finished it this afternoon.

I'm glad you're enjoying it. I'm plunking away on the next part as we speak (type? correspond?).

lilferret July 23 2012, 07:03:48 UTC

Good Lord, whew, that was hot. And I loved them teasing Owen. Now just to find out a little bit more about this mysterious stranger.

stevwil41 July 23 2012, 10:41:40 UTC

Thank you! Initially, I didn't care for Owen but he grew on me. Plus, he's easy to rile up which is kind of fun.

zazajb July 23 2012, 09:59:48 UTC

That was sizzlingly hot and fun and loving and playful and...
Ok, you get the idea. I LOVED IT and will be replaying those wonderful images in my head more than once!
Love that you have the hot and steamy alongside the TW mystery...
Awesome, hon, simply awesome...
Get some rest cos we want lots more!!!
D xxx

stevwil41 July 23 2012, 10:46:01 UTC

Thank you! I honestly wasn't sure how explicit was too explicit when I was writing it but decided to run with it.
I read a lot of different genres and figured I could mix it up a bit to suit myself when I started writing this. I'm glad it's working out. More to come soon:)