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[steventhewriter]

Paul knew what they all thought. Their whispered words behind his back were directed at him. They thought he was stupid, immature, naïve. He knew the sins they committed every day, and Paul was free from them. He had not succumbed to the temptations that swirled around him every day; short skirts, low-cut shirts, sickening sin they sucked into

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[young_american]

I like this.

[steventhewriter]

do you write?
join up, it's fun. read the community's userinfo for more info. or, it might be in the first post. regardless, check it out.

[steventhewriter]

oops, i forgot i accidently posted this in my journal and it's the one u commented on. the community is society_born i think. it's in my userinfo