two new stories

[steventhewriter]

sorry for the lack of titles...tell me what you think

Comments

[phredrlh212]

neh, i just didn't know you'd updated, you haven't in like a month.

i like the story, and the other one too but they need endings...or..just more. i especially like the claw metaphor in this one. my only criticism is that "he saw the driver laughing, and everyone else was laughing.." sounds weird.

good luck with the band tryouts!

~rachel~

[steventhewriter]

don't "neh" me!

[phredrlh212]

i'll "neh" you if i want to, bitch!

~rachel~

[steventhewriter]

bring it!

[strwberrychelly]

I'll read them tomorrow

good luck w/ the band tryouts! stevie's a playahh!

[steventhewriter]

gracias

[nstar]

i wish i could write like that.

[steventhewriter]

hey you write damn good
but thank you!