Fic: How To Disappear Completely, pre S/D, PG-13, 2/2

[superbadgirl]

Title: How To Disappear Completely
Author: superbadgirl/SBG
Characters: Steve, Danny, Chin, Kono, Catherine
Pairing: Steve/Danny
Genre: pre-slash, angst, H/C
Rating: PG-13
Word-count: @16000 total
Spoilers: None, really.
Warnings:
Summary: In a bad moment, Steve wishes something bad to befall Danny. When it does, it puts him on the suspect list.
AN: see

Comments

[landrews]

This is fantastic :-) You stuck right through with the deep Steve POV and didn't waver from it. The pacing is skillful and you balanced his thought processes with action and description that kept the story flowing. I really enjoyed this. Thank you!

[superbadgirl]

Thanks! I'm glad you did - I don't know what it is about this fandom that makes me want to stick to (mostly) one POV, but I'm happy it worked for you. :)

[landrews]

I think it's because the voices are so distinct and yet the characters so similar deep down, that it's hard to swap POV's without making them sound the same internally. I've only managed one Five-O fic so far with two POV's, the others are single POVs.

[superbadgirl]

That could be it, yep.

[rainbow_goddess]

Great story. It kept me hanging on till the end. Thanks for filling my prompt.

[superbadgirl]

:), you're welcome. And thank you! Hehe.