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Leaning Slightly to the Left | HG | Rated: T

Jan 06, 2011 23:19

Title: Leaning Slightly to the Left: Chapter 10
For: queenb23more who bid for this on the help_chile community.
Chapter Rating: T
Chapter Warnings: Angst, but in a good way!
Featured Characters/Pairings: Hermione, Ron, Ginny, Harry, OFC, Ron/OFC, Ron/Hermione
Chapter Word Count: 6,945
Summary: Hermione's life is not what she expected it to be and she doesn't know how to ( Read more... )

het, year: 2010, rated: t, pairing: ron/hermione, genre: angst, genre: fluff

Comments 14

shocolate January 7 2011, 00:48:08 UTC

‘Now, don’t stand there an’ start denying you don’t still love him, and luckily for you I have a plan!’

I genuinely LedOL!

‘Do you, Ronald Bilius Weasley take Matilda Lauren Fergusson to be your wife?’

Oh!!

'Yeah, but only because she's kind and loving. And then she fixed her face, straightened her dress and went and got the boy she loved.'

I do like your Lavender.

Also, the whole smut on his nose thing.

*squishes him*

thesteppyone January 11 2011, 09:20:12 UTC

I do like writing Lavender in this, she is a lot of fun!

The nose smut thing drove me insane as I had to drag something so fundementally R/Hr and drag it into a form that ROn could have written in his book but not be overly obvious was a R/Hr thing so Mattie wouldn't instantly realise he was still in love with Hermione... You see why it nearly made me go insane!

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thesteppyone January 11 2011, 09:20:30 UTC

Thanks Jo! :)

urbanmama1 January 7 2011, 01:47:56 UTC

Fantastic! Lavender was amazing. That last line was a killer. Great job with the reference to his manuscript and the pivotal line from Ron and Hermione's history. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

thesteppyone January 11 2011, 09:22:35 UTC

The nose smut thing drove me insane as I had to drag something so fundementally R/Hr and pull it into a form that Ron could have written in his book but not be overly obvious was a R/Hr thing so Mattie wouldn't instantly realise he was still in love with Hermione... insanity, yes.

I can't wait to attempt to write the next chapter! lol

maybe1ce January 7 2011, 01:59:22 UTC

I love it all...but, I do wish Mattie had voiced the truth BEFORE Ron said his "I do.."

Hermione is right, it's a Bad Thing that he was willing to marry her at all.

Lanus

thesteppyone January 11 2011, 09:23:15 UTC

I love it all...but, I do wish Mattie had voiced the truth BEFORE Ron said his "I do.."

But where would the fun be in that? Way too easy to resolve! lol :D

lauryne78 January 7 2011, 05:03:36 UTC

This was too wonderful for words!! I want the next bit right now!! :D

thesteppyone January 11 2011, 09:23:43 UTC

Thanks hon, I wish I had it for you, I promise I'm working hard!