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Fic: Advent Calendar (December 17): Five People Mac Might Have Kissed Under the Mistletoe

Dec 17, 2007 21:12

Title: Advent Calendar (December 17): Five People Mac Might Have Kissed Under the Mistletoe
Author: stellaluna_
Fandom: CSI:NY
Rating: PG for language
Summary: These kisses happened, even if they didn't. Hawkes/Mac, Stella/Mac, Danny/Mac, Mac/Peyton, Mac/Abernathy.
Disclaimer: With the exception of Abernathy, none of these are mine. Characters are the ( Read more... )

mac taylor, advent calendar, stella bonasera, danny/mac, mac/abernathy, pg, fic, csi:ny, stella/mac, hawkes/mac, danny messer, jack abernathy, peyton driscoll, sheldon hawkes, mac/peyton

Comments 23

powerof3 December 18 2007, 05:36:38 UTC

You know what touched me the most about this? The very last line.

You are, as always, fantastic.

stellaluna_ December 19 2007, 23:10:02 UTC

Thank you!

Last lines are always a struggle for me, so I'm glad this one worked.

sunhawk December 18 2007, 05:51:38 UTC

I agree about the last line, it's really lovely ^_^

stellaluna_ December 19 2007, 23:10:48 UTC

Thank you!

I struggle with last lines, so v. glad this worked.

blueraccoon December 18 2007, 06:10:28 UTC

I'm not sure which of these I like best; they're all perfect little pictures. If I had to pick, it'd probably be the Mac/Danny, for this line:

"Danny," Mac says. He drops his forehead against Danny's and they stay like that for awhile, not kissing now but with their mouths still touching, sharing the same air.

So incredibly intimate, this is; it made me shiver a little. Beautiful.

stellaluna_ December 19 2007, 23:12:55 UTC

Thank you!

I liked the way the Mac/Danny piece turned out, too, and I like those kind of unexpectedly intimate moments between two people. (They seem to happen a lot with Mac and Danny...)

penguingal December 18 2007, 14:42:19 UTC

Oh, I really love all of these. Your Hawkes voice is perfect. And the Mac/Danny makes me just want to wrap my arms around the boys. Nice work as always!

stellaluna_ December 19 2007, 23:13:56 UTC

Thank you!

I'm glad the Hawkes voice worked (it's always fun to write his explanations of things), and Mac and Danny really do both need a good hug.

fruitbat00 December 18 2007, 16:59:42 UTC

Adore them. I think my top three are Mac/Stella Mac/Jack and Mac/Danny although I love them all. Mac/Stella for the lines that just somehow break my heart.
He holds her to him and closes his eyes, and thinks of the mistletoe above their heads, concentrates on the feel of her in his arms and the steady beat of her heart against his chest. It's good and it's real, and he tries to memorize as many of the details as he can.

He'll remember the feel of her mouth on his; he'll remember the way the small of her back curves beneath his hand. He'll remember all of this, he tells himself; he will. He'll hold her as long as he can, and after that, he'll carry this kiss with him.

Just makes me want to hug him.

Mac/Danny I love the last line and it seems I am not the only one.

Mac/Jack I love because some how these two just have wormed there way into my brain. This time he doesn't even try to protest. He kisses Abernathy, because it's Christmas Eve and because he does know what to do with mistletoe, and because Abernathy's mouth is warm and ( ... )

stellaluna_ December 20 2007, 04:12:01 UTC

Thank you!

I'm glad you enjoyed all the various pairings. It's interesting for me to take a character through different, but similar, situations, and see how his/her reaction changes depending on how particular details of the situation change.