Chapter 4

[starcrossed_sky]

Comments

[lazzchan]

:D

I giggled over quite a few parts in here, especially the "shimmer" part. Hee.

Lovely as always and I was so glad to see another part. ^^

[starcrossed_sky]

XD The shimmer thing has become a running gag. Poor Josh, never should've read Twilight. It ruined his life.

[twigcollins]

A smirk behind the glow. "Unless you're unhappy being circumcised~"

*snork* Marvelous.

[starcrossed_sky]

XD Joshua just can't resist the flirting~ Neku is annoyed, but used to it.

[te_llamo]

Oh, you totally sparkle, Joshua. Don't deny it.

Probably one of my favorite chapters so far. I love your voice for Neku, if that makes any sense. The way you write thoughts and descriptions, you can still tell it's Neku that's the narrator, even if it's third person. You don't see that often.

All and all, wonderful chapter. The humor was priceless. :D /off to read the commentary

[starcrossed_sky]

My muses all have distinct third person voices. XD It comes from roleplaying, I think.

JOSHUA TAKES OFFENSE TO THE SPARKLES.

[te_llamo]

Mmm, well, it's a good skill to have. I'm kind of looking forward to seeing your other third-person voices now. xD

YOU'RE RIGHT, JOSHUA'S TOO COOL TO SPARKLE. ALTHOUGH SHIMMERING IS STILL KIND OF GAY. ;3

Looking at the dates, were you putting off posting this to the comm or something? xD

[starcrossed_sky]

Hopefully I'll be able to get some Joshua stuff up soon. Otherwise, there's going to be a KH drabble popping up, and maybe some D Gray-man fic?

He doesn't care two shits about teh ghey XDD

And yeah, got delayed by life, XDD