Probably one of my favorite chapters so far. I love your voice for Neku, if that makes any sense. The way you write thoughts and descriptions, you can still tell it's Neku that's the narrator, even if it's third person. You don't see that often.
All and all, wonderful chapter. The humor was priceless. :D /off to read the commentary
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEES ALMA NEEDS MORE FIC. Actually, Alma needs more everything.
XD For my Joshua, at least, it's not really the sex. He can get that from anyone with an Imprint and a memory wipe. The sex is a (possible) bonus to having Neku around.
Probably one of my favorite chapters so far. I love your voice for Neku, if that makes any sense. The way you write thoughts and descriptions, you can still tell it's Neku that's the narrator, even if it's third person. You don't see that often.
All and all, wonderful chapter. The humor was priceless. :D /off to read the commentary
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JOSHUA TAKES OFFENSE TO THE SPARKLES.
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YOU'RE RIGHT, JOSHUA'S TOO COOL TO SPARKLE. ALTHOUGH SHIMMERING IS STILL KIND OF GAY. ;3
Looking at the dates, were you putting off posting this to the comm or something? xD
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He doesn't care two shits about teh ghey XDD
And yeah, got delayed by life, XDD
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Mm, if Joshua did care about teh ghey, he's doing a failtacular job at acting straight. X3
Haha, I know the feeling. I was just wondering.
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Um, stuff related to the most recent manga chapters. ...Yeah, I'm an Alma fannit, your point?
Joshua is Nekusexual.
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...He really does act like a creeper to only Neku, now that I think about it. xD
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XD For my Joshua, at least, it's not really the sex. He can get that from anyone with an Imprint and a memory wipe. The sex is a (possible) bonus to having Neku around.
Do you have any IMs?
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GET ON THAT. My usual DGM babbling buddy is out camping for the week and I've SOMEHOW restrained Alma this long.
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