Drafts for the Time Traveling Machine.. ---[MTR Drabble]

Apr 15, 2007 09:41

I really couldn't resist writing drabbles for this fandom after watching it yesterday~♥ So without further delay, I have a drabble here ( Read more... )

fandom: meet the robinsons, fic, fic: drabble

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Re: <333 starstruck272 April 15 2007, 22:54:59 UTC
XD I'm glad you like...

I might write more XD Gimme a prompt?

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Re: <333 starstruck272 April 15 2007, 23:52:54 UTC
I can't write smut to save my life DX ..so I won't attempt it DX

But the idea is there XD I'll sleep on it.. and the bunny will probably come to me~♥

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fursona April 15 2007, 16:31:32 UTC
Oh hay, that's great! I of course picked out all the (ahem) undertones that may or may not have been there...

Man, I have issues.

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starstruck272 April 15 2007, 22:56:06 UTC
*ahem* Undertones? What undertones? *innocent look* What I write is like.. perfectly linear. No curves or nothing. Nu-uh XD

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get_in_get_out April 15 2007, 16:32:14 UTC
That was really cute! I like how in the last paragraph Lewis's attention went to a new invention so quickly. It souns like something he would do.

Good job!

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starstruck272 April 15 2007, 22:57:22 UTC
Hee~ Thank you~ Lewis is an inventor, and I guess inventors tend to be easily distracted? XD

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irrel April 15 2007, 16:37:53 UTC
Although I could see this as Lewis/Wilbur, I'll choose not to XD

I loved the idea behind the whole drabble... when Lewis grows up, Wilbur wouldn't remember what happened but he would. On the other hand, in the future Lewis met, Wilbur would remember and the relationship with his father could be really changed. Time travel gives me a headache XD

So... would Lewis invent the time machine again? Could he visit the 'alternate dimension' that is the future he knew? The Wilbur he knew?

Oh! I really liked this drabble =D

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starstruck272 April 15 2007, 23:00:41 UTC
Oh there's nothing but a tiny single whiff of Lewis/Wilbur XD There's nothing really there at all. *cough*

But yes, time travel gives everyone headaches DX I wonder if the future that Lewis went to would exist or not, because he said "I'm not going to invent you" to Doris, and Doris just kinda.. disappeared after that. Is it possible that that future wouldn't exist because there's no need to?

*cough* I might write more if you gimme a prompt XD *cough*

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irrel April 16 2007, 03:56:30 UTC
Prompt... prompt... how about this: You write more and I won't find out your address, hunt you down and kill you =3

In case you were wondering, that WAS a joke lol

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starstruck272 April 16 2007, 10:57:40 UTC
EEE! I'm already getting threats on my life? Oh! *dramatic pose* What has my life come to XDDD

But honestly.. Do you know how badly the time travel thing is eating my brain? I kept tossing and turning last night because I was trying to figure it out, so that somehow L/W can work out in my head, and my brain wouldn't let me sleep at all DXX

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truthespian April 15 2007, 21:32:06 UTC
Haha, this was cute.
And I definitely wouldn't mind some real Wilbur/Lewis stuff.

I mean...Good job. :D

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starstruck272 April 15 2007, 23:03:21 UTC
Glad you like~ XD

....But there might be a possibility of Wilbur traveling to the oh-so-distant past to see what his father could have been like oh.. how many years ago? XD

But really, how old is Lewis in the future? He's 12 in the "present" and Wilbur is like, 13, but how old was Cornelius?

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secretwindow1 April 16 2007, 00:04:04 UTC
I love the story so far! :D

How old was Lewis? Well, I've mapped it all out! :D
Lewis is twelve, which and he goes 30 years into the future to 2037, so he was born in 1995 and in 2037 he is 42. :D
Wilbur was born in 2024. ^_^

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starstruck272 April 16 2007, 00:40:02 UTC
So Cornelius is an old fart older man huh XD But Franny doesn't look 40+ O_O She's still so pretty~♥

Thank you for.. er.. figuring it all out XD I was wondering though.. where did it say that he traveled to 2037?

*cough* I want to figure something out so that Lewis ain't so old ._. I might actually write something more XD It'll be more like Lewis/Wilbur though (because of the setting that I made for this drabble) and possibly some Wilbur/Lewis if I ever get round to writing it XD I don't want to give too much away now do I XD

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