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Of Secrets Revealed

May 18, 2011 11:12

Title: Of Secrets Revealed

Author: Stargirl888

Word Count: About 2700

Spoilers: None

Pairing: Santana/Brittany

Rating: NC-17

WARNINGS: Contains Spanking and Domestic Discipline

Summary: Learning Lessons Verse: A step back in time to the first time Santana and Brittany Switched

( “I can’t believe you told them.” )

brittana, glee, spanking, learning lessons verse, santana/brittany

Comments 10

cranberry_pi May 18 2011, 13:54:37 UTC

I'm sure I sound a bit like a broken record, but I really loved this. I thought the way they negotiated (for want of a better word) Santana's new role was realistic and well-written, and I thought Santana falling back into her sort of default role afterward made perfect sense. I'm so in love with this verse, it's not even funny - I can't wait for more!

stargirl888 May 19 2011, 10:07:36 UTC

Yay, I'm pleased you thought it was realistic. Thx for commenting :)

P.s. Love ur icon

cranberry_pi May 19 2011, 15:38:41 UTC

You're welcome! And thank you! I love Kate, she's just epically pretty...

jacs1010 May 18 2011, 15:36:17 UTC

So excited to see there was an update.

Absolutely love this verse so looking forward to reading more :)

stargirl888 May 19 2011, 10:10:14 UTC

Glad you like it. Thanks for commenting!

heyafan May 18 2011, 17:53:48 UTC

Whoa... that was my favour verse so far. it was so good...

I'd like to see a verse where Britt and Santana dont agree on the punishment or that one of them is wrong. I'm curious about how they would work this out since they switch...

Eager for the next verse, as always!

stargirl888 May 19 2011, 10:12:03 UTC

I'm glad you liked it. I will be doing one where Brittany and Santana disagree as soon as I can think of a situation for that to happen in.

heyafan June 3 2011, 23:18:18 UTC

CAnt wait for the next verse! I'm addicted to your writing! so good!

stargirl888 June 6 2011, 08:01:27 UTC

Thx!

ext_465346 June 5 2011, 16:53:31 UTC

I thought you handled it really well. I always felt that Brittany is naturally Domme and Santana is naturally sub in their relationship and having them switch would make Santana feel a little uncertain and unsure. I loved how you described it from both girl's perspectives showing the uncertainty on both sides from the switch and at the end Santana's need to be a sub again to feel like she was in her proper place in the relationship. I can't wait to see more of the story and look forward to the future instalments.

I really think you are making the right choice in the Faberrittana verse by establishing Brittany and Quinn as the more dominant members. Obviously Santana would never be a sub for Rachel because she is far from the trust that is required in order to accept that role with Rachel. But I do think Santana would be willing to defer to Brittany and even Quinn when it comes to responding to Rachel. I think you established that really well in the previous instalment when you showed Rachel trying to escalate an argument with