Equinox [July 2nd] [Shinji, Hiyori] [Bleach]

[vicious_lullaby]

Title :: Equinox
Prompt :: July 2nd, “All this leads to one outcome” [31_days]
Characters/Pairing :: Shinji, Hiyori; can be taken as either Shinji/Hiyori or just Vizard gen.
Rating :: PG
Wordcount :: 200
Summary :: She won’t say that she’s worried.
Notes :: sandy_rain BB YOU CAN HAS SOME HIYORI~. ♥

Comments

[tenshiyaki]

You've got their characters down perfectly. Great work! :)

[vicious_lullaby]

Thank you! ♥

And that icon is adorable. XD

[anonymous]

hurray another wonderfull fic. Do you think you could do one of the vizards maybe what would be after they left the wearehouse to join the fight. I think that would be interesting!

[vicious_lullaby]

Sankyuu! :) And you never know; I might try my hand at it~. It's an interesting idea, and the Vizard really do deserve more fic. ♥

[scratchmist]

Prettily done. I really like the Vizards, and Hiyori and Shinji, and the strange way they show their concern by beating the crap out of each other. You were able to show that relationship very well. Good job.

The way sandals are clutched so tightly knuckles that turn white.
In this sentence, though, I think maybe there should be a 'by' (as in, by knuckles that turn white)? ^^ I'm not really sure, though.

[vicious_lullaby]

Thank you very much! ♥ The Vizard are my favourite faction in all of Bleach, actually; I love them and their dynamics to bits.

And thank you for pointing that out! That was actually a typo. XD;;;; It was originally meant to read The way sandals are clutched so tightly that knuckles turn white, but sleep-deprivation switched my words around, ahahaha. It's been corrected now! ^_^;