RAIN
Title: 'Rain'
Author: star_drop8
Length: 4chaptpies
Character(s): Dbsk
Pairing(s): Jaeho
Rating: Pg-13
Genre: angst, tragedy, mind!picker
Summary: Jaejoong had let go of his for for Yunho; he had let Yunho go, without knowing that Yunho was going to propose to him that day. Ever since, Jaejoong has been in nothing, but a gloomy state. And so has the weather. It has been raining ever since He left Yunho. The rain, as you will see further into the story, plays an important role for Jaejoong, as it seems to be the rain that is causing him to see Yunho again...he will soon come to realize that he made a mistake...a mistake that is too late to correct....
**A/n: It's been a while!!! i apologize for the long update *cough* i wonder if anyone is still reading this.....(??)
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Chapter 3: 'Raindrops keep falling on my head, heart and body.'
Jaejoong opened his eyes to see that he was inside the sewer line. Getting up from the ground, he tried his best to wipe excess fecies off of him. The smell was sour, causing his eyes to water; becoming hard to see. He heard the water leaking off the pipes slowly; an echo bouncing off the metal. 'How do I get out of here..' Jaejoong felt his way around, trying to find an escape. He stopped, when he heard footsteps trailing behing him. Looking back to see that there was no one behind him, he continued forward. A few feet ahead, and he spotted that same figure, walking slowly before him. He kept quiet as he went to see where the figure was heading to. He turned a corner, finding that the figure had, again, disappeared. "Hello? Is there anyone here?"
"The ring."
He closed his eyes and breathed slowly, in order to keep calm. "I know it's you. Can you please tell me how to get out of here?" Jaejoong asked in a low tone. He waited for an answer, still keeping his eyes shut.
"You couldn't wait forever couldn't you?"
Opening his eyes, he sees the figure walking from him. "You have to cleanse my lost love. Drown me in my own sorrow."
"What are you talking about?" Jaejoong picked up his pace, unsure of where he'll end up. "Yunho!"
"Cleanse my lost love.....drown me in my own sorrow...shield my heart...." the figure chanted.
"Yunho! What lost love?" Jaejoong was becoming persistant in finding answers. He felt his speed increasing as he found himself running after Yunho. The view before him, becoming blurry. His body growing tired; tripping over his own feet. Picking himself up again, he continued on, until the figure he had been following came to stop. Jaejoong watched the figure turn to face him.
"You." Yunho answered. At that moment, everything around him began to spin. Jaejoong held both hands to his head as his mind became heavy with dizzyness. Shutting his eyes he began to yell. "Stop this!! Stop with this game you're playing!!"
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-"I'm sorry Yunho, but we can't-"
-"Be? Why not Jae? Give me a good reason!!" Yunho wanted to know why his lover wanted to break up after 4years together. "Jae, 4years!! Doesn't that mean anything to you?"
Jaejoong saw himself breaking up with Yunho. The scene that had happened months ago was playing itself over, right infront of Jaejoong. 'What is happening!?' Jaejoong yelled in his head. He didn't know what was happening. He just stood there silently, watching himself walk away.
-"Jae...I was going to propose today..." He saw when Yunho placed the box on the ground. 'Yunho....' Jaejoong felt his heart tug.
-"Without you, my heart cries. And so does the sky.." Yunho spoke. Jaejoong couldn't take it. "Yunho!!" Jaejoong yelled. But, he couldn't be heard.
That's when the rain began to fall.
-"That is all that's left of our love. Our love is now washed away Jae." Yunho spoke to the box, before walking away.
"Yunho wait!!" Jaejoong yelled, still not realizing that he couldn't be heard. He had to get Yunho back. But, then the scene that was playing infront of him, changed.
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He was now surrounded by people crying; sobbing. He looked around and noticed that he was in a funeral home. He looked to his right and found Changmin and Junsu, heads bowed down. He then saw Yoochun, trying to cover up his tears. "Yoochun..." Jaejoong whispered. Yoochun turned around as if he had heard Jaejoong call his name.
-"Is there something wrong?" The priest asked Yoochun. "No, I just thought I heard that familiar voice..." Yoochun told the priest. "I know it's hard to let go.." The priest walked him away.
'Let go? What did he mean by that?' Jaejoong questioned. That was when he saw Yunho standing infront of a coffin. Jaejoong walked slowly up to where Yunho was standing. Hesitating, he looked into the coffin.
'Oh my god....that's-' Jaejoong backed away; unable to take in what he had just saw.
"Drain me of my sorrow...." He heard the voice again.
"Tell me what's going on!" Jaejoong demanded, seeing that everyone around were now gone. "Tell me!!" He fell to the ground. That's when everything infront of him changed scenes again.
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This time, he found himself standing on a bridge. He found himself stepping onto the edge, looking down at the water below him. It was a long fall.
'What am I about to do?' He couldn't pull himself back. He wasn't in control of his body any longer. Soon enough he found himself jumping off, feeling the water giving him a harsh welcome as his body went numb. Water filling up his lungs. His mind was screaming for help, but his body, otherwise. He then saw Yunho appear before him. "Drown me in my pain...." Yunho repeated before blackness came into view, surrounding him. His eyelids giving up on him.
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On to the final chapter!!!====>
Author: star_drop8
Length: 4chaptpies
Character(s): Dbsk
Pairing(s): Jaeho
Rating: Pg-13
Genre: angst, tragedy, mind!picker
Summary: Jaejoong had let go of his for for Yunho; he had let Yunho go, without knowing that Yunho was going to propose to him that day. Ever since, Jaejoong has been in nothing, but a gloomy state. And so has the weather. It has been raining ever since He left Yunho. The rain, as you will see further into the story, plays an important role for Jaejoong, as it seems to be the rain that is causing him to see Yunho again...he will soon come to realize that he made a mistake...a mistake that is too late to correct....
**A/n: It's been a while!!! i apologize for the long update *cough* i wonder if anyone is still reading this.....(??)
Click here to have raindrops fall on your heart
Click here to have raindrops fall on your head and heart
Chapter 3: 'Raindrops keep falling on my head, heart and body.'
Jaejoong opened his eyes to see that he was inside the sewer line. Getting up from the ground, he tried his best to wipe excess fecies off of him. The smell was sour, causing his eyes to water; becoming hard to see. He heard the water leaking off the pipes slowly; an echo bouncing off the metal. 'How do I get out of here..' Jaejoong felt his way around, trying to find an escape. He stopped, when he heard footsteps trailing behing him. Looking back to see that there was no one behind him, he continued forward. A few feet ahead, and he spotted that same figure, walking slowly before him. He kept quiet as he went to see where the figure was heading to. He turned a corner, finding that the figure had, again, disappeared. "Hello? Is there anyone here?"
"The ring."
He closed his eyes and breathed slowly, in order to keep calm. "I know it's you. Can you please tell me how to get out of here?" Jaejoong asked in a low tone. He waited for an answer, still keeping his eyes shut.
"You couldn't wait forever couldn't you?"
Opening his eyes, he sees the figure walking from him. "You have to cleanse my lost love. Drown me in my own sorrow."
"What are you talking about?" Jaejoong picked up his pace, unsure of where he'll end up. "Yunho!"
"Cleanse my lost love.....drown me in my own sorrow...shield my heart...." the figure chanted.
"Yunho! What lost love?" Jaejoong was becoming persistant in finding answers. He felt his speed increasing as he found himself running after Yunho. The view before him, becoming blurry. His body growing tired; tripping over his own feet. Picking himself up again, he continued on, until the figure he had been following came to stop. Jaejoong watched the figure turn to face him.
"You." Yunho answered. At that moment, everything around him began to spin. Jaejoong held both hands to his head as his mind became heavy with dizzyness. Shutting his eyes he began to yell. "Stop this!! Stop with this game you're playing!!"
.......................................................
-"I'm sorry Yunho, but we can't-"
-"Be? Why not Jae? Give me a good reason!!" Yunho wanted to know why his lover wanted to break up after 4years together. "Jae, 4years!! Doesn't that mean anything to you?"
Jaejoong saw himself breaking up with Yunho. The scene that had happened months ago was playing itself over, right infront of Jaejoong. 'What is happening!?' Jaejoong yelled in his head. He didn't know what was happening. He just stood there silently, watching himself walk away.
-"Jae...I was going to propose today..." He saw when Yunho placed the box on the ground. 'Yunho....' Jaejoong felt his heart tug.
-"Without you, my heart cries. And so does the sky.." Yunho spoke. Jaejoong couldn't take it. "Yunho!!" Jaejoong yelled. But, he couldn't be heard.
That's when the rain began to fall.
-"That is all that's left of our love. Our love is now washed away Jae." Yunho spoke to the box, before walking away.
"Yunho wait!!" Jaejoong yelled, still not realizing that he couldn't be heard. He had to get Yunho back. But, then the scene that was playing infront of him, changed.
...............................................
He was now surrounded by people crying; sobbing. He looked around and noticed that he was in a funeral home. He looked to his right and found Changmin and Junsu, heads bowed down. He then saw Yoochun, trying to cover up his tears. "Yoochun..." Jaejoong whispered. Yoochun turned around as if he had heard Jaejoong call his name.
-"Is there something wrong?" The priest asked Yoochun. "No, I just thought I heard that familiar voice..." Yoochun told the priest. "I know it's hard to let go.." The priest walked him away.
'Let go? What did he mean by that?' Jaejoong questioned. That was when he saw Yunho standing infront of a coffin. Jaejoong walked slowly up to where Yunho was standing. Hesitating, he looked into the coffin.
'Oh my god....that's-' Jaejoong backed away; unable to take in what he had just saw.
"Drain me of my sorrow...." He heard the voice again.
"Tell me what's going on!" Jaejoong demanded, seeing that everyone around were now gone. "Tell me!!" He fell to the ground. That's when everything infront of him changed scenes again.
...........................................
This time, he found himself standing on a bridge. He found himself stepping onto the edge, looking down at the water below him. It was a long fall.
'What am I about to do?' He couldn't pull himself back. He wasn't in control of his body any longer. Soon enough he found himself jumping off, feeling the water giving him a harsh welcome as his body went numb. Water filling up his lungs. His mind was screaming for help, but his body, otherwise. He then saw Yunho appear before him. "Drown me in my pain...." Yunho repeated before blackness came into view, surrounding him. His eyelids giving up on him.
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On to the final chapter!!!====>