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AU Series: Equilibrium - Chapter Twelve & Epilogue

Mar 07, 2009 12:42

Aiba dreamt of fingers gentle on his skin, perfumed with ginger and mint, carefully brushing hair away from his face. The cool breath of fall was coming; he nestled closer to the warm body beneath the blankets, lacing ankles and fingers together. The flavor left on his tongue was sweet. Whispered sighs in his ears tangled with ( Read more... )

t: equilibrium, #series, p: aiba/sho, r: pg

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maiaide March 9 2009, 13:29:16 UTC

You're welcome. :) I'm glad you read til the end.

yay_box March 7 2009, 12:46:39 UTC

End of fic calls for review so hi, I've never commented before but this is one of the most amazing fic I've ever read. The setting, the relationships, all the details : everything feels so real.
The ending is beautiful and sad and the epilogue makes it all better (I am incredibly relieved to see that Jun is still alive. I was seriously scared he'd die if he stayed and I think I would have cried if he had).

Congratulations on finishing, it has been a pleasure to read you.
(I'm adding the entire series to my memories, you can be sure I'll read it again)

maiaide March 9 2009, 13:30:44 UTC

Hehe, that's fine. I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for sticking out til the end. I wasn't going to kill off Jun! Though that might have made for a bit more chaos. No, he needed to be the noble sacrifice after all the crap I put him through. I might reprise this with his wife at a later time... when I have decompressed and edited parts that I despise. XD

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maiaide March 9 2009, 13:31:02 UTC

Thank you for reading until the end!

iloveqqmcmug March 7 2009, 23:42:16 UTC

Wow, this is the ending eh...
A nice and sweet conclusion :) This story was so amazing with all the details that you weave throughout your plot. It's been very enjoyable reading your story. Please keep writing :)

maiaide March 9 2009, 13:31:20 UTC

Thank you!

kkastic March 8 2009, 03:29:37 UTC

So I haven't found any sleep because I set my lazy ass down and read everything °_° and now it's 4.26am were I live xD and I cried like hell! But I'm also happy
The Story was so very touching I felt almost with them and the details were fascinating!!
I hope I haven't wrote too much bullshit x.x I'm going to fall like a dead one in my bed and hopefully I'm dreaming about Nino and Ohno and of cource Aiba and Sho XD
Please keep writing!!! Thank you very much for this Story! *bow*

maiaide March 9 2009, 13:32:05 UTC

Wow, you read it all in one go! That must have taken a couple hours. I'm glad you were enjoying it that much. Thank you for reading it all the way til the end!