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AU Series: Equilibrium - Chapter Twelve & Epilogue

Mar 07, 2009 12:42

Aiba dreamt of fingers gentle on his skin, perfumed with ginger and mint, carefully brushing hair away from his face. The cool breath of fall was coming; he nestled closer to the warm body beneath the blankets, lacing ankles and fingers together. The flavor left on his tongue was sweet. Whispered sighs in his ears tangled with ( Read more... )

t: equilibrium, #series, p: aiba/sho, r: pg

Comments 54

trivialaffair March 7 2009, 06:07:27 UTC

Oh you. I knew you would write a fantastic ending and of course, you did not fail to deliver. This was a great way to wrap everything up and my heart squees of Ohmiya and Sakuraiba and poor lonely Jun. Good job! I'm so proud of you :D

And now you can work on your other assignments. I look forward to those as well XD

maiaide March 9 2009, 13:26:51 UTC

Haha. Thank you for sticking out til the end. :) And all the help you gave me on this. Ohmiya didn't really get as much face time in this fic as I had thought they might but when you know they are already ~together~, any mention just warms the heart and you can read so much into a look or a touch. Or am I just talking shit?

Yes... my other assignments. Remind me again? XD

trivialaffair March 9 2009, 15:54:07 UTC

hahahaha I understand; you're not talking shit at all.

And will do :D will do.

arashi_nana March 7 2009, 06:11:57 UTC

*sighs*

Jun... you did the right thing.

I liked how you made it so that everyone would find their happy ending.

I absolutely loved this fic.

Great Job!

maiaide March 9 2009, 13:27:07 UTC

Thank you for reading til the end!

clarice_dragon March 7 2009, 06:59:56 UTC

NO!!!! its over!! *weeps non stop*

maiaide March 9 2009, 13:27:24 UTC

All good things must come to an end. :( It's almost been a year for this!

clarice_dragon March 10 2009, 02:02:57 UTC

and a very good year it has been!

thank you very much for such a good plot, and such great writing!

jliann March 7 2009, 07:00:42 UTC

Happy Ending Hearts!

The last letter was particularly pretty--and sounded very authentic.

Yay~ I'm so glad you wrote it this way. Thanks for creating an awesome universe in this series.

maiaide March 9 2009, 13:28:01 UTC

I'm quite pleased with the letter actually. Thanks for reading!

slowtech March 7 2009, 10:56:35 UTC

This entire series was amazing. I'm so glad that you went all the way through with it. I almost hesitated to read this because I don't want this universe to end, but I just can't stay away from your writing. This chapter was beautiful! I even got teary-eyed. You wrapped it up so nicely and I feel immensely satisfied.

Great, great work. Seriously. ♥

maiaide March 9 2009, 13:29:02 UTC

Thank you so much for reading til the end! I was kind of sad to write it to since I've had this going on for so long but I knew this would be the end. I had it all planned out before I even started. When I get bored, I might come back here to play.