AU Series: Equilibrium - Chapter Twelve & Epilogue

[maiaide]

Aiba dreamt of fingers gentle on his skin, perfumed with ginger and mint, carefully brushing hair away from his face.  The cool breath of fall was coming; he nestled closer to the warm body beneath the blankets, lacing ankles and fingers together.  The flavor left on his tongue was sweet.  Whispered sighs in his ears tangled with

Comments

[rinalin]

*happy sigh*

What a fabulous ending. It leaves a nice warm feeling in the pit of my stomach. Congratulations on coming full circle!

[maiaide]

Thank you too for reading it all the way to the end!

[oviparous]

thank you for thinking i'm awesome, you're awesome too, for writing this. MWAH. so glad for you that it's finished but... i haven't told you that i'm kind of sad too. ^_^ it's like seeing a good thing end.i owe you so many comments on this fic, so i will start with the last chapter

[maiaide]

That's right, you do owe me BIG TIME. But you are awesome for helping me with the last--and most important--part. I should be thanking my composition teacher for making me think I could write. Haha. One day, I'll send her a copy of this.

I know boys' love isn't for everyone. Except for the one part... it wasn't so bad here. Not like I had originally intended it to be anyway. I'm just a sick romantic at heart and wanted to write something I would want to read.

I'm just talking crap on here now when I should just crash. I'm dumb like that.

[oviparous]

but i'm tired *whines*

and i still have your RL letter to reply to! :PPP

[waxrose]

Congrats on finishing! It was neat to see how you tied up all the loose ends. :)

[maiaide]

Thank you for reading until the end!

[sundaecone]

Ahhh so much to love in this series and I've already told you about most of them.

I don't think I'd be the only one to say this but... OH JUN. ;__; Very noble of you. *pats*

Aiba's letter as the epilogue was really nice touch.

Congratulations Heather! ♥

[maiaide]

Yes! Now you see how I meant self-sacrifice? He had to be the bigger man in the end. He gets a lady friend now. Maybe I will write that later on... Meeting the wife and babies! :D I wrote the epilogue in one go without any real plan for it. Very ~stream-of-conciousness~ but that is totally Aiba.

Because I'm retarded I decided to re-write this comment because I SUCK. Hurrr

[sundaecone]

Yes I see now! I'm so proud of your Jun and I'm glad he's got a lady friend. Ooooh, daddy Jun would be interesting. >D

Picking through aiba's idiot brain is easy, but to be able to convey his feelings as the guy who loves his friends so dearly and sincerely is NOT EASY. I tried and it sounded cheesy as heck. Urk So congratulations on that one! *pats* ♥

Forgive my grammar and html fail in all the previous comments. Ohnoes! DX

And I still have the same reaction for the first part and the middle part. Started out peaceful and calm and warm and comforting then went on to... NAGASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! *reachreach*

Haaaaa~ okay, now I have to go back to work. orz

[snow_meow]

It is good that everyone found their happy ending.

What Jun did was a very noble and loving act.

[maiaide]

Thank you!