Number Sixty Six (2/?)

[stablergirl]

It's raining - right, left -

It’s pouring - left, right -

She is focused and determined and her brain goes through its mantra.

Humpty Dumpty sat on a wall - hook, right, left, right -

Humpty Dumpty had a great fall…

Right hook.  Right hook.  Right hook…

Right.

Breathe.

She knows the taste of blood - pewter, thick liquid iron, unsweetened

Comments

[tempestdance]

Gah. You're so good at this.
The character analysis, the plot, the twist of the plot...Holy moley.

[stablergirl]

Thanks! Hopefully more soon. Glad you're reading.

[dreamsofspike]

wow... this is fascinating... i can't wait to see where you're headed with it, it's awesome so far :)

[stablergirl]

thank you!! I'm still working on the next bit but hopefully it'll be done soon. I certainly hope it doesn't disappoint ;-)

[idioticonion]

This.

Is.

Brilliant.

Seriously, I have no idea where it's going. I can think lots of dark place, but it's genius.

MORE!

[stablergirl]

lol more soon!!! I promise!!

[solojones]

Oh wow, that was a stunning and totally unexpected reveal. I love it. I don't even know what I'm nervous about... I have some ideas but there are a couple possibilities. You've made it so vague and yet so incredibly tense. I'm dying to see where it goes. This is really well written.

[stablergirl]

thank you so much I was really trying to set up that vague "something doesn't feel right" atmosphere while still keeping things hazy so I'm glad that worked. Thank you for reading and commenting!

[andreabba]

Wow...is all I can say. PLEASE continue soon!!

[stablergirl]

lol thank you!! Wow is always the best compliment ;-) I'll have more up asap, working on it now.