Ha, finally! There's the poop. Right now all I can say is, I already can't wait for another entry, because I know what you're gonna do will be like a slap of awesome right into my face.
Also; gaining weight and drama as he stared at babies and she stared at him and then she stared at the floor and he stared at her and then I stared at Ted and Ted stared at me and then Lily tried unsuccessfully to stare at all of us simultaneously and Marshall stared at his curly fries HAHAHAHA most insanely hilarious thing ever. And (actually needless to say because it's Captain Obvious Striking Again here), you can practically see it in your head.
Carter Bays's said it somewhere lately that he digs reading fan stuff on the Internet, because it's good to familiarize himself with how people feel about the show, and sometimes it even gives him ideas. I wish he came across this little thing here, too. Pure awesome. Keep up the good work.
I'm really loving how this story is going. I love Ann as a narrator because she's so sweet, love Ted being kinda-lovesick-and-kinda-trying-not-to-show-it, plus there's LOTS of Barney/Robin and what more could a girl ask for?
As usual, loved this. LOVE Ann, like always. I think it's really difficult to write an original character in fanfic (and on TV shows, too) that actually feels like a real person, like someone you actually care about as much as you do the main characters, rather than just being a one-dimensional plot device but you have totally done it with Ann. I'm just sitting here nodding along with her and being so sympathetic to her plight. Luckily, I know she ends up with Ted eventually, so I know things will get better for her. And I love how they're not even dating and yet you've made it quite plausible that Ted already likes her (okay, it's Ted, he's probably already in love with her) and the moments where Ann mentions that she's not even thinking about Barney anymore, and the telepathic conversations
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This is so good! I love the way you write Annie. She's such a lovable character, the way you tell her story. Huge props to you for creating this awesome woman whose story we are all invested in!
Barney and Robin are making me want to bang their heads together! Can't wait to read more soon!
Is it weird that I like Ann more than the other characters in this story (even B/R)? ;) I really enjoy her whimsical sense of humor, her intelligence and also the fact that she observes all the details ( The part that everybody is 'staring' at somebody/ something was great!!) The story is really good, but you know what? you brilliantly portrayed a smart lovable awesome woman who is so normal at the same time. That's a great achievement. Can't wait to read the rest. :)
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Ha, finally! There's the poop. Right now all I can say is, I already can't wait for another entry, because I know what you're gonna do will be like a slap of awesome right into my face.
Also; gaining weight and drama as he stared at babies and she stared at him and then she stared at the floor and he stared at her and then I stared at Ted and Ted stared at me and then Lily tried unsuccessfully to stare at all of us simultaneously and Marshall stared at his curly fries HAHAHAHA most insanely hilarious thing ever. And (actually needless to say because it's Captain Obvious Striking Again here), you can practically see it in your head.
Carter Bays's said it somewhere lately that he digs reading fan stuff on the Internet, because it's good to familiarize himself with how people feel about the show, and sometimes it even gives him ideas. I wish he came across this little thing here, too. Pure awesome. Keep up the good work.
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I'm really loving how this story is going. I love Ann as a narrator because she's so sweet, love Ted being kinda-lovesick-and-kinda-trying-not-to-show-it, plus there's LOTS of Barney/Robin and what more could a girl ask for?
Well done and I'm really excited to reading more!
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This is so good! I love the way you write Annie. She's such a lovable character, the way you tell her story. Huge props to you for creating this awesome woman whose story we are all invested in!
Barney and Robin are making me want to bang their heads together! Can't wait to read more soon!
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The story is really good, but you know what? you brilliantly portrayed a smart lovable awesome woman who is so normal at the same time. That's a great achievement. Can't wait to read the rest. :)
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