John Denver Said it Better: Chapter 5

[stablergirl]

John Denver Said it Better (5/?)
Story: John Denver Said it Better (5/?)
Author: Stablergirl
Category: Romance, AU, Humor
Rating: MA
Spoilers: Up to and including The Leap, from there it goes pretty AU at this point.
Pairings: Barney/OFC, Barney/Robin, Ted/Mother
Author's Notes:  Here goes!  I promise I'm not intentionally dragging this out.  She just

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[aperfectsong]

Yay, you updated! I actually read this on my phone (lol) because I was sitting with my family and my boyfriend, who were all watching a football game. But my browser is really wonky with comments. So, a few days late, but here I am.

As usual, nothing was lacking with the voice in this chapter. I really lol'd at the "I was sexy like I've never been sexy before" paragraph. Good stuff there. And I loved the awkward scene with Robin - it kind of reminded me of how she acted toward Victoria, so it seemed in character for her. And the sex four times a day, haha, well, I guess I believed that too. =)

I wish there were more hours in the day to write fanfiction because as soon as I reached the end of this chapter, I wanted to read the next one. I keep feeling guilty about my own fanfic and finding the time to work on it amid work and applying for grad school and having a social life and not having my room look like a complete disaster.

But yes, baby incident! I can't wait.

[i_sudoku]

Sorry to comment so late! Just came back from holiday and I'm going overseas again in 2 days time so kind of busy.

Oh, poor Ann! She shouldn't compare. I am still thinking she will be the mother :)

I think Barney will change as the spoiler for upcoming episodes said that he would have more stable girlfriend. Sorry if I spoil you but it was posted in the community.

The above paragraph just proves that your story is belieavable and it could happen. Now please update your story, I'm already tracking it :)

[code_milkygreen]

OMG THIS FIC IS SO DAMN GOOD. I guess I came across your journal through one of those "recommend b/r fanfic" lists, I'm not even sure which one, now. Doesn't matter. I think it's gonna be enough if I say you made my day, NO, you made my WEEK, no, hold on - okay, whatever. It's just so awesome I can't really describe the very essence of the awesome that it is made of. Plus, you've got a fantastic character introduced there. I bet the real Mother won't even stack up to Annie, haha.

I just wanted to say I love your work. You rule. Keep updating. (Soon.) Cheers!

[aperfectsong]

*pokes*

How soon is soon?!