No More Missed Chances, Hawaii Five-0

[ssw_loved]

Title: No More Missed Chances 
Author: ssw_loved 
Pairing: pre-Danny/Steve
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: various season one
Words: 730
Warnings: none
Summary: "If he chooses to think, allows himself that malicious second where the hurricane of pounding, aching questions in his mind will pause, he knows he’ll see why Wo Fat did it."

Author’s Note: For quoththewriter , who said “… you

Comments

[quoththewriter]

and he’s suddenly caught between chasing Wo Fat or staying next to Danny and for a second, he almost, almost couldn’t make the choice.
And he remembers how he dropped to the ground next to his partner and tried, desperately, to save a life because it was more important than taking one.

ADFGHJKL;; ♥

[ssw_loved]

It originally said "dropped to his knees", but you see what I did there?

Also, he looks like a bulldog in the icon of yours. I approve. I like bulldogs. They are fluffeh. Well, not so much. But they're adorable. I think if they were human, they would complain a lot.

... I don't even know what I'm saying.

[quoththewriter]

Ohgod, can I just take a moment to have sex with your icon?

..Okay.
That's really all I had to say.

[ssw_loved]

Do you understand, my friend, how emotionally disturbing that one thought is?

[somehowunbroken]

This is aching and lovely.

[ssw_loved]

Thank you very, very much. <3

[kitmerlot1213]

I loved getting Steve's perspective on his life and especially on his hatred of Wo Fat.

This line: Danny’s the one that’s gone down, and he’s suddenly caught between chasing Wo Fat or staying next to Danny and for a second, he almost, almost couldn’t make the choice. was just excellent. He would have that moment of the bad guy's getting away before reality sets in and he has to save his friends life.

Great work on this :)

[ssw_loved]

Thank you so very much, especially since this is my first (completed) fic for this fandom.

[mrssnape13]

THIS. <3

Just lovely. Really really lovely.

[ssw_loved]

"THIS". Is one of the best compliments ever. <3333

Thank youuuuu. <33

[ssw_loved]

jlkfjsdcsdf THANK YOU. <4