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ssw_loved

No More Missed Chances, Hawaii Five-0

Mar 26, 2011 02:54

Title: No More Missed Chances
Author: ssw_loved
Pairing: pre-Danny/Steve
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: various season one
Words: 730
Warnings: none
Summary: "If he chooses to think, allows himself that malicious second where the hurricane of pounding, aching questions in his mind will pause, he knows he’ll see why Wo Fat did it."

Author’s Note: For quoththewriter , who said “… you ( Read more... )

character: wo fat, ficlet, oneshot, fandom: hawaii five-0, character: danny "danno" williams, character: steve mcgarrett

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ssw_loved March 28 2011, 23:46:46 UTC

Thank you!

cherish4 March 28 2011, 10:30:45 UTC

Oh this is angsty and intense and wonderful all at the same time!

ssw_loved March 28 2011, 23:47:17 UTC

Thank you! Oh, and by the way, I adore your icon. <3

cherish4 March 29 2011, 19:33:42 UTC

It's kind of wonderful isn't it? It's from azangal_icons.

zolac_no_miko April 8 2011, 20:51:38 UTC

*stalks you*

Oh wow, this was gorgeous and emotional and powerful.

And he remembers how he dropped to the ground next to his partner and tried, desperately, to save a life because it was more important than taking one. - GOOD BOY, STEVEN.

“But Shit-He-Almost-Died Face,” and here he coughs again, “is better than Aneurism Face.” - This made me smile. OH DANNY~! ♥

And that thought, that malignant tumor he’s carried around with him, it ruptures, and he knows what he’s liked to deny all along. He knows why it’s Danny lying in that hospital bed and not him.

Wo Fat takes (tries to, he reminds himself, when the thought crushes him) people Steve loves. - UNF, AND THERE IT IS. Guh, this is a really powerful realization.

Really lovely, nicely done!

ssw_loved April 8 2011, 20:56:59 UTC

I LIKE STALKERS. <3 I'm actually being your stalker today, too. I have your story open in a different tab for when I'm done with my essay. True story.

*grins* Thank youuu!

zolac_no_miko April 8 2011, 21:37:06 UTC

Hahaha, mutual stalking, FOR GREAT JUSTICE!

ssw_loved April 9 2011, 00:54:32 UTC

Mutual stalking has commenced.

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ssw_loved April 21 2011, 00:07:07 UTC

You are welcome very much! And thank you very much for responding with a comment! I love feedback, and I'm quite glad you liked this even though it was heartbreaking.

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ssw_loved April 21 2011, 00:06:22 UTC

lSDFJSLD> <333. You just completely made my day, week, maybe my month. I will DEFINITELY be writing more for this fandom. And definitely with Steve and Danny, too.