Comments | squills: Fic: The Game (Mohinder/Sylar, PG-13)

squills

Fic: The Game (Mohinder/Sylar, PG-13)

May 14, 2008 18:15

Title: The Game
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Mohinder/Sylar
Words: 1375
Warnings: Mild slash. A bit of swearing. Sylar being creepy as usual.
Spoilers: Through the end of season 2.
Disclaimer: Not my characters, not writing this for profit.
A/N: This was written for the table I claimed at
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genre: angst, char: mohinder, genre: au, table: un_love_you, rating: pg-13, char: sylar, pair: sylar/mohinder, genre: fic

Comments 22

greyelveneyes May 15 2008, 02:26:33 UTC

Mohinder looks shell-shocked as he shakily calls out, “We’re coming.”

Sylar smiles even more broadly. “Now there’s a thought,” he whispers. Eyes half-closed, he rubs his lips lightly across the shorter man’s, from side to side. “You know, there were a couple of other things I was thinking about doing, Mohinder.” He draws the syllables of the name out as it trickles over his tongue. “Would you like me to tell you about them?”

Hottest. Dialogue. Ever.

Period. ♥

squills May 15 2008, 03:03:19 UTC

I don't think of Sylar as usually being crude, but...oh, man, I don't think he could resist saying and doing that to Mohinder. And I have to admit, I'm rather glad he couldn't resist doing it...

Thank you!!! ;0)

megmatthews20 May 15 2008, 02:45:38 UTC

Your non-smut is just as hot as a lot of people's actual smut...

OMG! I'm...kinda speechless from how awesome that non-con kiss was...and...everything.

I think I may be a little messed up in the head...but I really liked this Sylar...and I'm glad you did it from his POV...

I <3 your stories, SO MUCH!

cheers

squills May 15 2008, 03:18:34 UTC

Thank you! :0) What's always important to me is the emotion behind someone's actions. I mean, there's a lot of smut in this fandom, but that twisted emotional vibe is what makes Mylar smut the hottest. And I think if you can pull that emotion in, it makes everything about them hot...

I think I may be a little messed up in the head...but I really liked this Sylar...

Join the club! ;0) I mean, I'd like to see Sylar somehow get back a little bit of his humanity...but he was the character that sucked me into the show the instant I saw him because he was as ruthless as he was intelligent. It can be stressful to write him that way, but I love reading him when he's being a little bastard.

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it!

levitatethis May 15 2008, 03:33:57 UTC

What an interesting verse this is. I like all these different ways of exploring what it would be like if Sylar ended up working with Mohinder and friends. What I like here is that you have Sylar quite clearly existing as his own entity within this larger picture. That is, he's helping them out (amused and having fun with their admission of needing his help) for his own purposes but he is also fully aware that he can't trust them, that they're looking out for him/working with him will only last as long as the need him. It makes for a fascinating type of alliance ( ... )

catoasapun May 15 2008, 03:34:33 UTC

Ooooh, the tension. THE TENSION. *shivers happily* :D

This was great!

Ooh my goodness, you write mindfuckery incredibly (yes! Thats a compliment! :D) and this was totally delicious. WOW.

etoiledunord May 15 2008, 05:37:34 UTC

There was a mylar fic posted sometime last summer at the pit with the same title, so when I saw this on my flist, I did a double take. This one was considerably less disturbing. ^_ ( ... )