[Dark Angel] [Het] [T] I Don't, I Can't, I Do

Apr 05, 2008 16:39

Originally posted at http://community.livejournal.com/femme_fic/13852.html for the femme_fic ficathon, written for promisetodepartTitle: I Don't, I Can't, I Do ( Read more... )

het, dark angel, romance, fanfic

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futma April 5 2008, 21:57:57 UTC
I am really glad I don't mind Dark Angel spoilers. 'Cause this rocked and I wouldn't have been able to stay away from this!(especially as it helps me getting through the days between me and a newly rented DA DVD)

P.S.: The bad hair is gone and dead. Cute stubble AWOL.

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squeelated April 5 2008, 22:55:30 UTC
Oy, the bad hair! Actually, I think the giant cop glasses were worse than the hair. What were they thinking?

I'm glad you enjoyed this! I may yet write you more. Feel free to prompt me.

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futma April 5 2008, 23:07:15 UTC
Do NOT remind me of the glasses.*shivers*
I just heard that Michael Weatherly thought it would be a good idea to have his hair all down and messy in the first ep of the second season. You know, due to Logan being all down and messy because of Max' supposed death. Emotions! In the hair! Just why the hair didn't magically become all happy and sexy again after Logan became all happy and sexy towards Max after her return is a mistery.

You will be prompted!

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squeelated April 5 2008, 23:22:24 UTC
I remember hearing that. I seem to remember that he was trying the same thing in the first season of NCIS (hair to match the mood) and the producer told him to Cut It Out! Smart producer. *nods*

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Woohoo! mrsevilpigeon April 6 2008, 16:22:33 UTC
Oh my God, I loved this!

Your characters were spot on, and your dialogue was perfect. I liked the way you jumped from present to flashback, and the whole thing was just so well-crafted. Add the fact that it was cute and funny and romantic and plausable, and you've got one brilliant little fic on your hands.

Thanks so much for this story.

(You'll write more, right? Please! Please!)

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Re: Woohoo! squeelated April 6 2008, 16:33:36 UTC
a.) Your icon made me laugh so hard. Bert + Bernice= OTP old school!

b.) Your feedback totally made my morning! I'm especially glad that you thought it was plausible - that was a main concern for me.

c.) I really might write more. I was really enjoying it, and I had some ideas about the siege on Terminal City.

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I so love this ... grievingmess April 6 2008, 21:57:50 UTC
This was such a pleasure to read. I absolutely loved the dialogue, the transitions from scene to scene and of course the fluff made everything that much better.

I loved this so much. thanks for making my morning =)

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Re: I so love this ... squeelated April 6 2008, 23:50:41 UTC
That is just a joy to hear! Thank you so much!

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fauxcynic April 7 2008, 05:46:24 UTC
oh, yay!

So glad I found this! I particularly liked your very clever use of a couple canon features about Joshua, the caduceus and lack of bar code ("keeping him off the books") to play into your cure for the dreaded virus.

Many nice moments! Please bring us more M/L! And thanks for sharing...

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squeelated April 7 2008, 22:39:30 UTC
Thank you so much! I was really tickled with that idea. (I had to come up with some way to cure them to meet the prompt I was given, and I wracked my brain, believe me!)

I'm really glad you liked it. Thanks for the feedback!

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ajzkitten69 April 7 2008, 08:52:37 UTC
Haha, yay. There just isn't enough Max/Logan in the universe, so thank you for contributing. I loved it.

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squeelated April 7 2008, 22:40:10 UTC
*grin* I'll try to keep doing my part for the cause.

Glad you liked it! Thanks!

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