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Mar 29, 2010 17:49

Author: nyxelestia
Recipient: k155-me
Title: Control
Characters/Pairing(s):Alex/Yassen
Summary: The first time Alex ran into Yassen ...
Rating: R
Disclaimer: All Alex Rider characters herein are the property of Anthony Horowitz and the Penguin Group. No copyright infringement is intended.
Warning(s): None
Word Count: ~5,000
Author's Notes: N/A

Control )

fic, 2.0

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anonymous March 29 2010, 23:02:43 UTC
I liked this a lot :)
I am a sucker for Yassen giving Alex what he needs, and the writing here was just lovely.

Captain Jas.

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k155_me March 29 2010, 23:46:18 UTC
Sqeee? :)

Loved it: there were some parts that made me Aww-out-loud and others that seriously made me grin. Apreciated it, very much so. Thanks for writting it :)

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hpstrangelove March 29 2010, 23:58:50 UTC
This was great! What's nice about a fest is that even when a gift fic isn't for me, I can still enjoy it as if it was. So many of my own kinks were hit (I'm so glad I'm not alone in enjoying those handcuffs!).

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annephoenix March 30 2010, 07:09:32 UTC
Ditto this comment!
:-)

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loony_lucifer March 30 2010, 01:13:34 UTC
That was sweet and hot at the same time. Good job!

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kennahijja April 2 2010, 00:23:51 UTC
Holy cow, that was good!

I loved your Alex to bits - such an utterly messed-up bundle of raw nerves, reflexes and tension, scared to death of himself. I adored his more adult side too - drink, trawling for sex in bars... doing everything to distract himself, I felt.

Your Jack is wonderfully written too, especially the way she teases details out of Alex, and her steadfast loyalty despite everything.

And omg, the power dynamics between him and Yassen were *awesome*. You really got Alex's dread of losing control across, and the way he's all torn by wanting Yassen as much as he does. And Yassen's single-minded insistence on having control that's all mixed up with possessiveness and understanding that that's what Alex needs in order not to go mad.

I think my favourite moment was this:

Alex's arms were covered in red finger marks and angry purple spots.
"Did I do this?" he murmured, looking between them, loosening his hands from the shirt binding him.
Yes," Yassen said simply, wrapping his arms around Alex. "You tried."It really ( ... )

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