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Bones fanfic: Escapades (4/10)

Jun 26, 2008 08:44

Title: Escapades (4/10)
Pairing: Booth/Brennan
Spoilers: none
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Certainly there would no longer be a need for guessing once Angela told everyone what she was witnessing
Word count:5,915
Prompts: a jacket/coat, something purple, and a cold beverage of some sort, place: Dupont Circle (prompts by crearealidad)

A/N: Huge thanks to crearealidad for the ( Read more... )

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Comments 5

episkeyit June 26 2008, 16:00:39 UTC

So I just read all four chapters of this at once and AIUGHWIJNHWIH. You're fantastic. Your writing quality is stellar overall and you don't let Booth or Bones get out of character which makes this even more enjoyable. I can't tell you how much it spoils a fanfic when the characters aren't themselves. Angela was great as well--I'm glad you brought her in!

I honestly can't wait for more because this is fantastic. Booth and Bones together is great on it's own and you just do it really really well.

I'll stop rambling now; GREAT JOB :)

spy_barbie July 2 2008, 17:50:45 UTC

thank you very much for taking your time to leave feedback and for your kind words. :D

crearealidad June 27 2008, 06:37:54 UTC

I love that managed to pull of sex in Dupont Circle! I will think of you and this fic every time I go out for coffee there... which is a lot. Seriously.

Not to mention, I'm never going to get over this line:
They kissed like they bickered: one would never let the argument fade, always firing back a new reply, a new argument to keep the discussion alive.

spy_barbie July 2 2008, 17:50:54 UTC

habita July 22 2008, 20:29:11 UTC

I´m sorry I am so late! I saw this morning that you have already published the 6th chapter and I´m only reviewing chapter 4! I want holidays! *cries*

LOVED it! It was funny and sexy and well written and I had a great time reading! I´m totally in love with your fics, Lucy, you always do an amazing job, and I mean it :-)

My favs:

I absolutely loved the beginning. I love the idea of Booth waiting for her, sitting on her couch. I don´t know, but it´s something I really love to imagine when I think of the two of them in a relationship. And then the way they talk about that he has a new case but at the same time start to stare at their lips, it was awesome! :-)

"They kissed like they bickered"
I totally LOVED your description of their kisses. I found it simply brilliant :-)

I also love the way you wrote the story, with Brennan telling Angela one of their escapades. I was reading and it was like watching a movie with flashbacks or something, with the voice over and all, lol. I really enjoyed it ;-)

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