Bones fanfic: Escapades (4/10)

[spy_barbie]

Title: Escapades (4/10)
Pairing: Booth/Brennan
Spoilers: none
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Certainly there would no longer be a need for guessing once Angela told everyone what she was witnessing
Word count:5,915
Prompts: a jacket/coat, something purple, and a cold beverage of some sort, place: Dupont Circle (prompts by crearealidad)

A/N: Huge thanks to crearealidad for the

Comments

[habita]

I´m sorry I am so late! I saw this morning that you have already published the 6th chapter and I´m only reviewing chapter 4! I want holidays! *cries*

LOVED it! It was funny and sexy and well written and I had a great time reading! I´m totally in love with your fics, Lucy, you always do an amazing job, and I mean it :-)

My favs:

I absolutely loved the beginning. I love the idea of Booth waiting for her, sitting on her couch. I don´t know, but it´s something I really love to imagine when I think of the two of them in a relationship. And then the way they talk about that he has a new case but at the same time start to stare at their lips, it was awesome! :-)

"They kissed like they bickered"
I totally LOVED your description of their kisses. I found it simply brilliant :-)

I also love the way you wrote the story, with Brennan telling Angela one of their escapades. I was reading and it was like watching a movie with flashbacks or something, with the voice over and all, lol. I really enjoyed it ;-)

"His palms are the appropriate size for his height and he has long fingers"
LOL. It was SO Brennan! I loved it! And I agree with her, by the way, Booth has beautiful hands!

"I wasn’t gazing at you, I was just studying your features."
LOL.

"I’m in love with you, Temperance."
Aaawwwwwwwwww, I wasn´t expecting him to say that at all and it was so sweet! I could see the scene in my head, with Booth holding her hips and his chin on her belly and I could perfectly see his eyes staring at her and... *melts*. Awesome, beautiful moment, Lucy, I loved it :-)

"You’re so into these public displays of affection"
Loved it! Lol. And loooove the smut. So. Hot. It was so sexy that he touched her against a tree, in a public place. I´m starting to think I´m a little naughty, myself, lol. And I loved it then, when she is touching his belly. I really loved the way you wrote it, describing that she now knows that he likes being touched there. I don´t know, I found it tender, somehow :-)

But I think my favourite one is the last paragraph, when Brennan calmed Booth down by kissing him. It so remind me of one scene of "Atonement"! (I hope you get to watch it finally! ;-)), when Cecilia calmed Robbie down at her apartment, after his "conversation" with Briony. I love that scene and I love yours because they are so sweet and they are so LOVE ^^

Thanks a lot for sharing! :-)

Besos.