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All the Things That Are Lost, Ch. 2

Dec 29, 2006 15:46

Title: All the Things That Are Lost ( Read more... )

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jesterlady December 29 2006, 22:55:56 UTC

I'm so interested to see where this is going.

Willow's so resolved it's scary.

Your Buffy is excellent and I really like your Dawn as well.

ladyk8 December 31 2006, 00:08:15 UTC

Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying it. :-)

Willow figures she's right (or "not wrong", anyway, if there's a difference), and she ain't backing down.

gillo December 30 2006, 01:24:48 UTC

Excellent voices - I particularly liked the tense phone call to Willow, though Andrew is a delight too.

Looking forward to more of this!

ladyk8 December 31 2006, 00:11:04 UTC

Thanks! I do enjoy writing dialogue, so I'm glad you think the voices work. And Andrew is particularly fun to write.

goosegirl9 December 30 2006, 19:46:22 UTC

It always so good to see another story. Yours is great, and I can't wait to see what happens next. :)

ladyk8 December 31 2006, 00:14:00 UTC

Thanks very much! I'll try not to take too long to write (darn that real life, always getting in the way...)

All the Things That Are Lost, Ch. 2 cordykitten December 31 2006, 00:03:53 UTC

Buffy was so eager to talk to Willow. But Willow sounds as if she knew about Spike too. Especially the "We discussed -". Discussed? With Giles maybe? ~ Sounds as if Illyria did the spell that opened the portal.
Disappointing (for Buffy). Giles decided to knew better again for Buffy's sake. And Willow with not telling Buffy. Like she decided it was better to bring Buffy back from the death, not asking.
Ah well Buffy is still dating the Immortal, she has a credit card too? Spike won't be pleased about it but he wasn't either when he was in Rome. If Buffy didn't hoarded her grief and acted carefree.. but that's too late to think about it now.
At last she is on her way now, now that she knows. Even if she has some company now ;-)
I'll friend you and try not to miss the updates again :)

Re: All the Things That Are Lost, Ch. 2 ladyk8 December 31 2006, 00:29:25 UTC

The way I have it figured out, both Willow and Giles (and obviously Andrew) knew, so yes, the "we discussed" was a reference to that. With the Scoobs all gone their separate ways, and Buffy showing little interest in slayage at the moment, I think that Giles and Willow might feel justified in making that decision.

As for the credit card, I thought it would be funny. "Italian Express: Don't Leave Rome Without It." Hey, I don't want Buffy having to pay for those tickets herself.
:-)

Re: All the Things That Are Lost, Ch. 2 cordykitten December 31 2006, 00:41:58 UTC

An in a way it's funny (and justice too when you think what the Immortal did with Spike and Angelus) that Buffy is using his money to get back to Spike (well start the journey).
I just don't like *cough hate* the twist Buffy/Immortal. Too bad that Joss had to make it that way. Thank god for fanfiction to make it better.

Re: All the Things That Are Lost, Ch. 2 ldyavalon January 14 2007, 00:01:54 UTC

In the end it isn't even Buffy, but just a look-a-like, can't wait to get my hands on the comic XD