My Grief - my friend's fic

[spudacus_1]

My Grief

Length: One-Shot.

Rating: PG/12A
Pairings: JaeHo
Genre: Very angsty/death fic.

Btw, this was written by a very close and great friend of mine, and so I am posting this up for her! :D thank you! :D

The cold was as intense as the silence.

The silence that was broken only by gentle mewling sobs.

The cold wrapped itself around him like an icy

Comments

[ara_niey]

why must yunho always die?and why must he left jae alone?
it's always like this..
why?why?why?~T_T

[spudacus_1]

I know its jsut so sad!
i didn't write this tohugh, but my friend did thougH! :D
hehehe and i am very proud of her! :D hehehe even though its very sad heheh
thanks for commenting :D

[andyfied]

i think if yunho were to really die..jae will have a similar effect as described in this story.....

thank u scott's fren..it was a sad and painful but good story..felt like someone was squeezing my heart as i read the story...i cannot bear to see jaeho apart!! no no no...it cant be!!!!!!!!!!!

[spudacus_1]

hey nuna!
how are you!?
so you love me even more then was it!?
hehehehe
it is very sad! i will get her to reply to you! okay! :D

seeya
<3333

[blackorcid]

i also think that if yuhno really died jaejoong would have a similar reaction. i love they way this is writen, the way things jaejoong says or does sets the whole feel of the fic and i feel that this part in particular makes it very tear jerking

(This was goodbye. The goodbye that he hadn’t been able to say yet, that he couldn’t say. That he knew he would never be able to say.)

this part really hit me and i really felt for jaejoong.
overall i really liked this fic. please pass my congratulations to your friend and make sure your friend keeps up the good work

[spudacus_1]

I agree with you Kira-Chan! :D
i will tell her you commented aswell! :D eheheh
yeah it is well done, im so proud of her! :D ehehhe
i will do! :D
hehehe i hope she does aswell eheheh
<333