Dead Man Walking [Bleach, Grimmjow/Ichigo]

[aviss]

Title: Dead Man Walking
Author: aviss
Pairing: Grimmjow/Ichigo
Rating: NC-17
Word count: aprox 2.200
Prompt: Grimmjow/Ichigo: rough sex - “and dark our celebration was”

Comments

[liralen]

I liked it a lot.. both the emotional ups and down and Ichigo's attraction and sense of justice. That was good. I like how Grimmjow seems so alien to Ichigo, but he still responds... and I *LOVED* the ending. *laughter*

Apologies, but I spotted a small thing...

Ichigo responded with socking intensity, biting and scratching and moaning and clinging to Grimmjow's lean body.

socking or shocking?

[aviss]

Thanks! I corrected it... I always miss something, no matter how many times I go over it...

And I'm glad you like it, they are so different, but yeah they can't deny the attraction.

[liralen]

Me, too, on always missing something... But, yes, exactly... definitely a give and take of a very powerful sort. Nicely done.

[dogmatix_san]

*snerk!* Not much in the fandom, but I love the fic ^_^

[aviss]

Thanks!

Re: *De-lurks*

[aviss]

*blushes*

Thank you! I love to write the sex between these too, they have such an unhealthy relationship...

amazing

[lilsister2]

lol really great work. Really got me captured. lol

[renkuroi]

I read it here.

Real good work.

It is definitely one of the best.

Love the idea of Ichigo being played around by Grimmjow.

Good Work. Always cheering you on!