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Saiyuki (Jien/Gojyo)

Jul 02, 2007 09:02

Title: Just Like That
Author: Jan toxictattoo
Rating/Warnings: R
Word Count: 670
Summary: Dokugakuji (Jien) and Gojyo steal a few moments to be alone.

Author's Notes: Prompt - July 2: #53. Saiyuki, Jien/Gojyo: incest, giving into temptation - "I love you. Its wrong, but I can't help it. I've tried to protect you, and now I'm hurting you.".

( Just Like That )

saiyuki, toxictattoo

Comments 16

writtenbyrandom July 2 2007, 13:12:43 UTC

Oh, the pain is so pretty. This is simply beautiful.

toxictattoo July 2 2007, 15:27:17 UTC

[glees] Thank you!

ladyofshadow July 2 2007, 14:59:02 UTC

I loved this line Dokugakuji thrust; sweat trickled down his spine to pool in the dip of his lower back. The image of where the sweat pooled was quite vivid.

Nicely done!

toxictattoo July 2 2007, 15:28:07 UTC

Hooray! Thank you. I got this thing for sweat as it rolls down the spine. Terribly sexy to me.

mainekosama July 2 2007, 18:17:26 UTC

Those poor guys. This was a great story but it made me feel so sorry for them. It's somehow hopeful at the end, but so sad.

toxictattoo July 3 2007, 23:06:10 UTC

[grin] Thank you. They are such a tragic pairing, aren't they?

wk_recomend July 3 2007, 02:34:24 UTC

*flails* OMG GUH ^___________________^

This was amazing. I loved the imagery, loved the emotion and Gojyo just kills me always. *snuggles him*

Thank you so much for writing this :D

D

toxictattoo July 3 2007, 23:06:45 UTC

It was my pleasure to write it. I'll take any opportunity I can to write these two, especially together. They are my guilty pleasure. Thank you!

wk_recomend July 4 2007, 02:06:26 UTC

Oh yes. My guilty pleasure, as well. ~_^

D

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toxictattoo July 3 2007, 23:09:07 UTC

[bows] Thank you. I love these guys so very much and they are my first 'cest pairing that I went gaga over. Especially due to the pain they both feel.