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Saiyuki (Jien/Gojyo)

Jul 02, 2007 09:02

Title: Just Like That
Author: Jan toxictattoo
Rating/Warnings: R
Word Count: 670
Summary: Dokugakuji (Jien) and Gojyo steal a few moments to be alone.

Author's Notes: Prompt - July 2: #53. Saiyuki, Jien/Gojyo: incest, giving into temptation - "I love you. Its wrong, but I can't help it. I've tried to protect you, and now I'm hurting you.".

( Just Like That )

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Comments 16

ravenbell July 3 2007, 19:27:14 UTC

A little says a lot. Wow. I'm a sucker for good dialogue, and this is just about perfect.

toxictattoo July 3 2007, 23:09:51 UTC

[grins] Hooray! I'm a sucker for good dialogue myself and I always enjoy writing it. One of my favorite things to write. Thank you!

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toxictattoo July 4 2007, 10:44:53 UTC

Hooray! Thank you, I'm glad it was pleasing!

puddingcat July 16 2007, 19:43:24 UTC

I love how you've got across their characters in this. Gojyo's banter and willingness to take things as they come, while Jien worries that being discovered will hurt his brother (and almost only secondarily, that it could lead to them losing each other again).

That it's incest is the least of their problems, isn't it?

toxictattoo July 19 2007, 01:31:00 UTC

Thank you and ain't it the truth?

I have to admit, right on the heels of Sanzo, Dokugakuji is one of my favorite characters. And I believe Doku/Gojyo is my second cest pairing I've gotten into and it never fails to take my breath away with it's aching feeling between the two brothers.

irrelevant July 24 2007, 03:49:02 UTC

I'm already a 'cest fan for the Ishidas in Bleach, and now, with one stroke, you've converted me for Saiyuki and this. Lord, god almighty, but this was hot and angsty and perfect. And so, so IC, which is the cherry on my ice cream sundae. Thank you.