Imbroglio

[spokes_man]

Title: Imbroglio
Author: spokesman/shigai
Pairing: YunJae
Genre: AU, angst, romance
Length: Oneshot
Rating: NC-17
Word count for the whole fic: 9.854

Summary: The city of darkness, they called it. Crime, poberty and sickness ruled the claustrophobic alleys. Life was in danger at every corner. Jaejoong dreamt of wide avenues, of clean air, of blue

Comments

[unknowntibidip]

It sounds good~
I don't have enough time now but I'll be back later to read and comment ♥

[unknowntibidip]

THAT WAS AMAZING!

Wow, it was seriously breathtaking all along.
From their first encounter to their first night, and to the attack. Everything was just awesome.
I'm not found of gangster fics but this one left me stunned. I really enjoyed reading it!
I really liked that difference between the black and walled city, and the blue and empty/large spaces. As well as the fact that their love was forbidden and they litterally had to fight for it. It was really good. Besides, I have to say that you did a good job on description, I was almost suffocating too >.<
And I'm happy beacause it ends well. At first I was a bit scared that one of them would die by the end, because well, they were enemies afterall. So I'm glad it's a happy ending and that they could find their happiness together outside of the Walled City.

Thanks for this awesome oneshot!
Once again, it was great ♥

[dongwook]

Spot

[dongwook]

Wow this was amazing, dear!

You are amazingly talented.. You can write and draw?! ♥

This was the perfect story I was craving. Forbidden love and happy endings :) forever meming this

[jaeftw]

SPOT (:

[jaeftw]

bb this is amazingly beautiful ;_;
i love how everything seems so dark but then yunjae found each other everything seemed to be happier.
and the ending was just precious <3

you're one talented girl and this fandom is so lucky to have you *huggles*

PS will definitel mem this fic >333

[blu_eyezz]

It was a great read bb <3 I esp like how u inserted the pictures to give an idea of how its like!
Wow @ the Walled City. I couldnt believe something like that existed..It is indeed fascinating...!I can just imagine how suffocating it must have been in there.but I guess ppl get used to it..

It was nice & long.Love the ending too!Abit surprised @ DongWoo but glad he's dead.How dare he shoot JJ??!!lol XD

[junochun]

This is so great, it was like watching a great movie, you portrayed the scene beautifully
I am lost for word and all I can say is "WOW this is such a great piece of work"
you left me speechless.....thanks for the hard work<333