Imbroglio

Nov 27, 2010 15:31

Title: Imbroglio
Author: spokesman/shigai
Pairing: YunJae
Genre: AU, angst, romance
Length: Oneshot
Rating: NC-17
Word count for the whole fic: 9.854

Summary: The city of darkness, they called it. Crime, poberty and sickness ruled the claustrophobic alleys. Life was in danger at every corner. Jaejoong dreamt of wide avenues, of clean air, of blue ( Read more... )

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dilovesyunjae November 27 2010, 15:20:36 UTC
WOW! im speechless. mem'ing this..<3

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pikasu November 27 2010, 15:44:23 UTC
pls how on earth do you write 9.8k words omg???
this is also a cleverly concealed spot.

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pikasu November 27 2010, 16:01:53 UTC
this. you. omg. speechless. omg. omgg. omggggggg *braingasm*
there were a few grammatical and spelling mistakes here and there, but in the grand scheme of things, THEY ARE NOTHING. NOTHING I TELL YOU, NOTHING. i love the whole enemies-but-lovers plot and the pictures in between enhanced the entire atmosphere and mood of the story. it was brilliant, basically. pls. you are a very good writer. now i will have to read your first fic. i am sure it is equally as brilliant as this.

after i was done reading and done keyboard smashing udgbdofugb and braingasm-ing, i scrolled up and read the description and so i realized you are also the amazing artist. why are you so awesome?? now i do not know if i want you to write or draw forever so pls do both! ♥

after reading 9.8k words, it has given me motivation to continue writing my fic. so i shall not slack anymore!

thank you very much for your fic ^^ it was brilliant. ♥

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yunjae93 November 27 2010, 15:45:14 UTC
That was so wonderful!
I was afraid there wouldn't be a happy ending when Jaejoong got shot :'D
Yunjae ftw~~ <3

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junhiya November 27 2010, 15:50:49 UTC
SPOT.

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junhiya November 29 2010, 21:36:22 UTC
WOW. Beautiful, amazing, breathtaking, awesome, ect...
Thank you ♥

And please keep writing :)

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gayforyunho November 27 2010, 15:51:35 UTC
This is @zhengyunhao.

This oneshot was beautifully written. :) I was scared when I read that Jaejoong was shot but... luckily it was in the shoulder. :D

Haish~ I like the ending too. <3 So sweet and homely. Such a blissful feeling. ;D

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