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Fic: Malaika (Spock/Uhura STXI fanfic)

May 31, 2009 02:27

Title: Malaika
Author: tehlanes
Rating: R (non-explicit sexual content)
Characters/Pairing: Spock/Uhura
Part: 1/1
Wordcount: 2983
Summary: They are both fully aware of his shortcomings. But in moments like these, Nyota is amazed by how little it truly matters.
Warning: Spoilers for the movie, obviously. Set significantly post-film, but non-specific to ( Read more... )

.author: tehlanes, rating: r, fan: fanfics

Comments 47

fluxdance May 31 2009, 17:44:37 UTC

Hmmm. Well, the singing part was cute, but I definitely wouldn't call it fluff.

tehlanes May 31 2009, 17:54:16 UTC

I mentioned to someone else that it was fluff for me, since most of the stuff I write usually ends up pretty dark or angsty. I'm glad this was at least substantial though. XD

skywardprodigal May 31 2009, 19:12:31 UTC

Beautiful and wonderful. Thank you.

tehlanes May 31 2009, 19:54:29 UTC

<333.

breebree16 May 31 2009, 20:08:06 UTC

Absolutely wonderful. Held together so perfectly. I love an exploration of their sex life, but it's not smut or overly graphic.

My favorite thing about this story is the subtle hints of the pregnancy, I actually had to read it twice to catch it. I look forward to more of course.

tehlanes May 31 2009, 20:12:14 UTC

Thaaaanks. D: I can't do smut to save my life, so I'm super relieved to hear this turned out okay. I think if I'd tried to get any more detailed it would have been BEYOND epic fail. To the nth power. And highly laughable.

And I was scared the hints might have been TOO subtle. I still think they are. But people are catching them anyway so I'm not complaining. *shifty eyes*

ilu for the comment. Thank you so much. <33

breebree16 May 31 2009, 20:32:00 UTC

For me, the biggest hint was the him giving up his office, then I caught the other two. Maybe I'm just not that observant lol.

love the love!

tehlanes May 31 2009, 20:40:08 UTC

Actually I think that's pretty awesome considering I thought that one was the most subtle of the three. XD You rock. *gold star*

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ryuugazaki May 31 2009, 20:34:08 UTC

*Rereads* Holy cow, she's PREGGERS.

tehlanes May 31 2009, 20:39:23 UTC

...AHAHA. *ded.*

It's official. XD BEST. REACTION. EVER.

ryuugazaki May 31 2009, 20:46:32 UTC

I FAIL!

ryuugazaki May 31 2009, 21:02:49 UTC

But in my personal defense, it was nearly 4 am when this popped up on my flist, and I was definitely too ingrained in your prose to notice the little hints D: So glad I decided to read this again under a more functional consciousness!

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herm_weasley May 31 2009, 21:10:20 UTC

This is OMG SO BEAUTIFUL. The descriptions are to die for and the final scene is so SWEET!
Seriously, amazing amazing work ♥

tehlanes May 31 2009, 21:17:58 UTC

Eeee, thank you dearest! I'm so pleased that you liked it. =D <3