My Devotion- "Forsake Me" (Team Heaven)

Jul 31, 2009 09:50

Title: Forsake Me (My Devotion series, part 1 of 7 ( Read more... )

team heaven, author:nightswhisper, character:lucifer, -round 5: loyalty, rating:pg-13

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lassroyale July 31 2009, 18:55:26 UTC
Even as I festered in the pit, it took me thousands of years to see how my imaginable devotion to him had been completely in vain. And yet… I still wait for his voice to reach me.

This last line is POWERFUL. It resonated with me for awhile after I had read this. The whole thing is one of the best Lucifer stories I've read because I can truly have sympathy for him. I imagine that's what it might have been like, after all he was the most beautiful and glorious angel in Heaven.

You've outdone yourself; this was beautiful .

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nightswhisper August 2 2009, 02:30:22 UTC
o.o Wow. That's one heck of a compliment! Thank you very much! *Huuug*

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