Contentment is a pearl of great price for kalliel

Jul 22, 2011 15:47

Title: Contentment is a pearl of great price
Author: ravelqueen
Recipient: kalliel
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: ehm, not as cracky as it sounds?
Spoilers: all Seasons
Author's Notes: The prompt asked for Sam to be transformed into a non-vocal animal and also angst...I noticed I'm not that good at angst, but I tried my best and I really hope you'll like your gift ( Read more... )

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saphirablue July 23 2011, 16:29:30 UTC
Oh, wow! This is awesome!

I love that the story starts out humorous but is pretty angsty in the end. :)

I just wish that we get to know if Sam is cured or not.

Thank you for this fic! :)

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ravelqueen September 1 2011, 20:52:34 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed it!

As if he gets cured, you can decide for yourself, I made quite a few scenarios possible, mainly because prompter wanted angst, but just ending it totally hopeless would have made me so, so sad (I'm more of a schmoop person). Basically, this is my compromise ;)

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13chapters July 24 2011, 20:41:39 UTC
Holy crap, that ending! Oh, Sammy, it's so tragic that apparently the only way he can have contentment is to forget who he is.

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ravelqueen September 1 2011, 20:54:20 UTC
XD, I'm so happy everyone was suprised by the ending ^^.

Well, it is up to debate if that wasn't just the deity getting her wires crossed, but with all the shit that has gone down in his life, I do think that Sam will never be the most balanced person.

thank you so much for reading!

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sistabro July 27 2011, 02:22:42 UTC
This was fabulous! Quietly horrifying but with a small bit of hope at the end. Except, what if they change him back and he's all zombie!zen!Sam? /considers, shudders

Really well done, the build, the premise, the emotional resonance, the writing.

*crosses fingers that LJ won't eat this again*

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ravelqueen September 1 2011, 20:58:21 UTC
Thank you!

I love that you noticed that zombie!zen!Sam (which is a wonderful way to describe him *gg*) is a valid possibilty in how it could play out, it is probably even the one I would have gone with, if I had the stomach to end it on a totally angsty, horrible note. (I don't, which is why you all get the ambigious ending^^)

thank you for putting the extra effort in commenting even while LJ had its melt down ;)

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Contentment is a pearl of great price catsintheattic July 29 2011, 15:52:29 UTC
That was a hell of a creepy ending! (Because I'm bad, I believe Sam can't be fixed. ;-D)

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Re: Contentment is a pearl of great price ravelqueen September 1 2011, 20:59:47 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed it!

I tried to make it as creepy as possible, because it is a very horrifying thought.

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keerawa July 30 2011, 05:03:54 UTC
*shivers* That was surprisingly chilling. That loss of self.

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ravelqueen September 1 2011, 21:01:16 UTC
god, its so weird to be happy I managed to creep people out XD

thank you so much for commenting

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