Contentment is a pearl of great price for kalliel

Jul 22, 2011 15:47

Title: Contentment is a pearl of great price
Author: ravelqueen
Recipient: kalliel
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: ehm, not as cracky as it sounds?
Spoilers: all Seasons
Author's Notes: The prompt asked for Sam to be transformed into a non-vocal animal and also angst...I noticed I'm not that good at angst, but I tried my best and I really hope you'll like your gift ( Read more... )

2011:fiction

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galwithglasses July 22 2011, 18:22:01 UTC
Nice build-up of tension as the story went on. Totally plausible for Sam to get stuck in a situation like this.

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ravelqueen September 1 2011, 20:43:44 UTC
Thank you!

I'm so happy the build up(and situation) got across as realistic, because that's what I was most worried about.

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monicawoe July 22 2011, 19:02:23 UTC
Most excellent. Very sad ending -- but at least there is no pain.

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ravelqueen September 1 2011, 20:44:51 UTC
Thank you so much!

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ratherastory July 23 2011, 00:55:16 UTC
Yikes, what a way to end it! It started out light and almost cracky, and for a while there it was nice to see Sam relaxing and just going with the flow, so you really got me with that twist there. Fantastic job!

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ravelqueen September 1 2011, 20:47:57 UTC
Thank you!

Funny fact, I really didn't realise that that ending would be considered a twist till my beta pointed it out to me.

It made me smile so hard that you enjoyed the story, because I adore your Fusion!verse, so that was a really nice compliment for me. :)

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vie_dangerouse July 23 2011, 02:37:04 UTC
Oh wow. I adore this to itty bitty snake-scale shaped pieces. The building angst, the Sam-ness of the snake, when you talked about Dean moving to sleep downstairs, aww. And I especially loved your ending line, and the transition to present tense there. A+.

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ravelqueen September 1 2011, 20:50:23 UTC
Thank you so much! *blushes*

I'm really glad that I got the characterisation of Sam right (for you at least^^).

You don't want to know how often I rewrote that last line, but then I guess it definitevely was worth the effort

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counteragent July 23 2011, 03:12:12 UTC
Great!

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ravelqueen September 1 2011, 20:50:40 UTC
thank you!

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