a little dust never stopped me none for sailorhathor

Feb 01, 2010 16:10

Author: hateable
Recipient: sailorhathor
Rating: R
Warnings: None that I can think of.
Pairings: girl!Dean/Ruby
Summary: Set during season three. Dee tastes like whiskey and cigarettes, like strawberry lipgloss and someone’s last breath.
Notes: sailorhathor, I know this isn't exactly what you asked for, but I hope you enjoy it anyway! Thanks to shiplessheathen for all the hand-holding and ( Read more... )

pairing: ruby/girl!dean, character: girl!dean winchester, rating: r, character: ruby, # fanfiction

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adictd2life February 2 2010, 02:26:32 UTC
This was great. Loved girl!Dean. :D Hot and sweet. Great job!!

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likewinning February 2 2010, 02:46:31 UTC
Thank you!

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sendthewolves February 2 2010, 03:01:39 UTC
Eee! I know I already flailed at you about this, but I think I need to do it again. I think that the thing I love most about this is that it takes on a life of it's own, and Dee, I think I might just be in love with her.

“You lookin’ for a thank you?” Dee asks, smirk twisting those pretty lips and her eyes lit up like a storm. She’s got one hand down Ruby’s jeans now and she’s sliding a finger inside Ruby and Ruby’s already wet for it. It’d be fucking pathetic, if she didn’t know things are probably about the same for Dee. Hell isn’t what turns girls like them into animals; they do that all on their own.

Omg this! I love how you've written the relationship between these two, it's so complex, and so damn hot it makes my breath catch.

And I still have so much love for Sam and Dee's relationship, and how you really get inside it in so few words.

God, that last section kills me. Thank you so much for participating in this, I'm so glad you did!

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likewinning February 2 2010, 03:21:01 UTC
You can flail as much as you want to, bb. ;] Sam and Dee were SO HARD TO WRITE (I'm pretty sure this is the first time I've ever written them without shipping them, what), so the fact that they worked for you makes me really happy.

Thanks for setting up the exchange, lady! I'm really glad I signed up, too. <3

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sailorhathor February 2 2010, 03:05:24 UTC
WOO! Thank you very muchly for this story! I love girl!Dean when she's a female version of Dean but still her own character, giving the appearance that she can handle everything when she's really just as lost as everyone else. The balance between her being lost for a way to save herself and lost to stop this thing she's doing with Ruby while pretending she's fully in control is very nice.

Tons of hot mental pictures too!! :D Just the thought of Blonde!Ruby and girl!Dean together is hot enough, but then you made them move. :D And share french fries! And play footsie under the table! Yee!

Some of my favorite lines:

Like, it completely figures that Lucifer and everyone would be against her getting laid good and proper for the first time in centuries.

Heehee!

Sam never asks like Dee guesses a parent would, someone other than their dad babbling on about curfew and bedtimes. He still asks like the little kid he used to be, sad puppy eyes and small voice.Awwwww. I love that Sam and Dee have this relationship, that it's almost more ( ... )

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likewinning February 2 2010, 03:16:42 UTC
Oh, wow, I am so relieved you liked this. I had a great time writing it, especially girl!Dean. Thank you! :D

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bekkis February 2 2010, 03:27:40 UTC
This was really awesome! I really loved how you wrote Dee, and especially how you wrote Ruby. I loved season 3 Ruby and you captured her so well here! This was a really gorgeous story! I loved it:D

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likewinning February 2 2010, 03:34:09 UTC
Season three Ruby is my FAVORITE Ruby. Thank you so much! :D

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familiardevil February 2 2010, 03:40:38 UTC
Oh boy.

This was fantastic. I loved it. I just...jeez.

First off, I really love your writing style. The descriptions were really perfect but they were never too much. They fit right in. And the dialogue was just perfect! S3!Ruby is probably my favorite SPN character of all time - of all time - and you NAILED her. And I don't even want to go into girl!Dean, because I rarely ever see her written well and Jesus Christ on a hotdog you nailed that bitch too.

And I loved their relationship, or their fucking, or whatever you'd like to call it. I normally don't go for Dean/Ruby of any style because I find it entirely out of character for Dean, but in this, it was entirely believable. So thank you! I really loved reading this, and thank you so much for joining our exchange! I hope to see you the next time we start up again :D

Also, this line:

and for a second she’s so close Ruby thinks Dee’s going to kiss her goodbye, but instead Dee says, “You fuck with my brother, I’ll find out. I’ll come back. You just wait.”A ( ... )

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likewinning February 2 2010, 03:50:15 UTC
fslgkdskfge; thank you SO MUCH. Characterization is my biggest concern always, so I am SO happy they both worked for you! (But especially Ruby, because I never expected to be able to write her. SO INTIMIDATING.)

Thanks for starting the exchange! I had an awesome time with it. ♥

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familiardevil February 2 2010, 03:54:17 UTC
I can't understand why (...okay, I can, LOL. It's my biggest concern with fics too) because you made Ruby your BITCH.

I'm so happy to hear that *g* Thanks again <3

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