the whiter shade of black 2/2

Sep 29, 2011 00:37

Title: the whiter shade of black
Author: ajin
Pairing: Jiho/Kyung, Jaehyo/Kyung, OT7
Rating: R
Genre: AU, Romance, Friendship
Word Count: 8,639
Summary: One person turns Kyung's world upside down and forces him to reassess his life.
...even if it's little, it should be enough... )

!fanfic, f:block b, jiho/kyung, jaehyo/kyung, the whiter shade of black, ot7

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no zikyung icon so settle for hyunseung :3 countrymir September 29 2011, 00:10:19 UTC
His friend has never been one to share things, especially not his bed. i thought dirty things >:3

when hyo asked kyung is he was bi i was like, YOU DIRTY TRAMP YOU PROBS JUST WANNA KNOW YOUR OWN CHANCES TO SWAP SPIT :|

“You’re awfully quite today.” bb this needs to be quiet ( ... )

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But Hyunseung is pretty so I'm fine :3 ajin September 29 2011, 10:45:06 UTC
Still crying, dying and rolling in glitter and tears. I'm unworthy of this essay of a comment ;A ( ... )

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yunlovejae September 29 2011, 11:23:37 UTC
this is naisuuuuu. my poor heart T__T I really really like this story ;__;
and idk why, I love this part so much
“Will you wait?”

“I might.”

“Might?”

“There’s no guarantee when it comes to feelings, Jiho. They’re fickle, especially when one-sided.”

the ending was just perfect <3 btw, I demand a sequel for ubomb n___n

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ajin September 29 2011, 21:40:08 UTC
Thank you n__n

I'm happy to hear that. I really wasn't sure about the ending even after I posted it.
I don't know about it. I like reading U-Bomb but I find it extremely hard to write Yukwon. Maybe...

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ajin September 29 2011, 21:42:30 UTC
Thank you so much :3
Believe me, I did too while writing. It's always nice to hear that my fic affects people to this extent.

Can't do without crack when it comes to block b~

Maybe? I really can't write Yukwon well though so I'm not sure. We'll see.

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nerveless September 29 2011, 21:42:08 UTC
I love how there were these moments of beautiful description in here, about the "wolf" inside of kyung (and I totally can associate wolves with him, now) and his various reactions to things. I think kyung was a HUGE jackass, but at the same time, I could identify with a couple things he went through. love is hard, man ( ... )

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ajin September 29 2011, 22:22:14 UTC
I used to write poetry so it's pretty typical for me.
This fic was a spur of the moment based on my own jealousy problems and I guess I made Kyung as much of a douche as I can be. Feelings of any kind get get annoying :|

Neither could I tbh. I haven't even planned on writing him like this. He wrote himself.

Hmmm,I wonder...I almost threw a Minhyuk/Hanhae here though...

My goal was to confuse so I'm glad it worked. Be my guest, she'll prolly be happy XD

Thank you n__n Zikyung n Jaekyung are my main otps :3

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ajin September 29 2011, 22:35:44 UTC
Thank you! I don't think my writing is anywhere near perfect though :3

This tickles my ego so much. I'm happy you liked it this much~
I definitely will. They're one of my main otps in block b.

I don't really mind but I don't add people back on my main lj often. It became very private orz

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